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snarryhols ([info]snarryhols) wrote in [info]snarry_holidays,
@ 2008-12-06 21:31:00

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Entry tags:fic, giftee: eeyore9990, rated: nc-17

Fic: The More Things Change
Title: The More Things Change
Author: [info]bewarethesmirk
Giftee: [info]eeyore9990
Word Count: 2,120
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Harry/Snape, mentions of Harry/Ginny
Warnings: PWP, AU, dub-con, student/teacher, object penetration, angsty/unresolved
Disclaimer: All Harry Potter characters herein are the property of J.K. Rowling and Bloomsbury/Scholastic. No copyright infringement is intended.
Summary: “ Just because you had a death wish and allowed the Dark Lord to kill you does not mean you’ve the freedom to daydream about your sordid love life in my classroom.”
Author's Notes: Eey, I hope you enjoy this! I never tire of writing detention!fic, and I was so pleased to see you liked it. ;-) Hope you enjoy! Thanks to L and P for the last minute, speed-of-light beta.



Harry was staring somewhere in the vicinity of the ceiling, when Snape’s voice brought him back down to earth.

“Mr. Potter.”

Harry lowered his head and blinked a few times when he saw Snape’s hooked nose and glowering eyes from across the desk – which was to say, uncomfortably close. Was he having a nightmare? Harry removed his glasses and rubbed his eyes with his fist.

“Mr. Potter, answer me this instant.”

“Professor Snape—” Luna’s voice sounded as dazed as Harry felt “—excuse me, but can Harry really answer thisinstant. An instant is fleeting, transitory, transient, fugacious…”

“You sound as if you’ve swallowed a Muggle thesaurus,” Seamus said.

“That’s not all she’s been swallowing,” Malfoy drawled. Goyle, ever the faithful minion, cackled.

Everyone except Snape (who was still focused on Harry) looked over at Dean, and Harry wasn’t surprised to see the look of embarrassment flash across his face. Ron was seated on the same bench as Harry and the back of his ears were red.

“I’m going to kill you, Malfoy,” Seamus said.

“Enough.” Snape whirled away from Harry’s desk and he stomped down the centre of the desks towards the front of the room. “Miss Lovegood, I have admitted you into Advanced Defense Against the Dark Arts as a courtesy – do not abuse it anymore or you’ll be ousted faster than you can say ‘ephemeral’. We do not need another know-it-all.” He turned to look at Hermione when he reached the front of the room.

“As for you, Mr. Malfoy, I’d rather not entertain such grotesque goings-on.”

Harry knew what was coming.

“And you, Potter,” Snape said, his tone communicating his vast hatred. “Well. What is there to say? Words defy your insolence.” Snape turned sharply, his robes snapping as he turned to face Harry. “ Just because you had a death wish and allowed the Dark Lord to kill you does not mean you’ve the freedom to daydream about your sordid love life in my classroom.”

Snape was so pathetic. These days if Snape didn’t have Harry’s undivided attention inside of lessons, he’d start snarling.

“I was not daydreaming,” Harry lied. He slouched back in his chair and winced at the ink dripping onto his otherwise blank parchment.

“I’m sure Mrs. Weasley will appreciate that sentiment,” Snape said, tone full of venom.

Harry had thought saving the old git’s life in the Shrieking Shack would have eased some of Snape’s loathing, but—if possible—Snape seemed to hate him more. Well, fine. Harry hated him, too.

“Sir, I’m not sure what Ginny has to do with Defence…” Harry blinked, face devoid of any expression.

“She has nothing to do with Defense, which is why she’s not here.” Ron snarled, but Snape either didn’t hear or didn’t care. He bared his teeth.

“Potter, I should—” He stopped. “Detention. Tonight. Old Potions classroom. 8 o’clock.” The directives were each dropped like so many individual bombs, planted to cause mass carnage.

Harry shrugged. “Whatever.”

Snape only smirked in response.

***


Three raps at Snape’s door yielded no answer, but Harry knew better than to think Snape had forgotten. Snape didn’t forget, especially not something like giving a detention – and not when that detention was custom designed for Harry Potter.

Snape was probably inside, engaging in a bit of daydreaming of his own – 10 Ways to Rend Harry Potter Limb from Limb .

The full force of Harry’s next knock rattled the door hinges. For extra reinforcement, Harry called, “Snape!”

The door was thrown open.

“Potter,” Snape said through clenched yellow teeth, “will you please explain why you are bellowing my name to all and sundry?”

“Yeah. I can,” Harry said, monotone. “You weren’t answering.”

“Contrary to popular opinion, I don’t live to cater to your every whim.” Snape smiled, and it was grotesque. “Twenty points from Gryffindor for not addressing me in a formal manner and for pounding on my office door like a barbarian.”

Harry rolled his eyes.

“Ten more.” Snape leant against the doorframe and raised an eyebrow. “Do you wish to continue your infantile tantrum? I have all night.”

“Well, I don’t.” Harry pushed past Snape into the classroom, and he heard Snape release a sound of frustration. “Let’s just get this over with.” Harry edged to the centre of the room, squinting at the foul smell of burnt toadstools, and awaited for one of the instructions so familiar to him from over the years: Potter, decapitate these worms! Potter, copy the instructions to the potion you managed to destroy so spectacularly. Potter, scrub the cauldrons by hand or it’s detention again next week.

“Potter, stop dawdling and take a seat.”

Harry’s neck might have suffered from whiplash, he turned his head so fast. Harry looked at Snape in time to see him casting charms on the door with intricate swishes of his ebony wand. Before Harry could guess what Snape was doing beyond the normal eavesdropping charms, Snape stalked toward Harry, the scowl that might have been – for all Harry knew – engrained on his face. “I said to take a seat, Potter.”

Harry had been the victim of Hermione’s repeated attempts to have heart-to-hearts, and he had a horrible image of Snape playing counsellor (she was bound and determined he was suffering from PTSD). “I’m fine, thanks. Just tell me what to do.”

Snape raised a brow. “I suppose even recalcitrant Gryffindors have their submissive days.”

The purr in Snape’s voice was about the most disturbing thing Harry had ever heard, so he immediately denied to himself he’d ever heard it.

“Er,” he said instead and took a seat at one of the desks in the front row – the one where Malfoy had once sat. Harry hoped there were no contagious Malfoy germs anywhere around.

Snape surprised Harry by walking to the edge of the desk where Harry sat. Harry wondered what was next, what Snape was going to say –

There was nothing said at all. Snape merely stared. Under Snape’s gaze, Harry’s mouth went a bit dry. “What?” he asked.

“I was pondering how to best allow the punishment to – ah – sink in.” There was a wry twist of Snape’s lips.

“I don’t understand,” Harry said.

“Oh, but you will.”

Snape put both of his palms down on Harry’s desk, and Harry’s spine curled as he leant away from Snape, away from the horrible breath assaulting his face.

“You are now more insolent than ever,” Snape said, and Harry was surprised to hear his tone was calm and seemed singularly focused on proving his point. A point which Harry did not yet know, but was becoming increasingly worried to learn. “I will not tolerate it anymore.”

Harry clapped his own hands against the desk, and a thud resonated throughout the room. “You’ve been telling me that for years and you’ve never done anything about it,” Harry snapped into Snape’s furious face. He found himself angling forward a bit, as if magnetically attracted to Snape’s ire. “I don’t know what it is you think I’ve done.”

Snape’s hands grabbed Harry’s into a rough grip and before Harry could shout, Snape was speaking. “You haven’t acknowledged the memories I showed you. I gave you far more than you needed, far more than you deserved, and since you left me to die, you’ve been gallivanting over the school without a care in the world.”

So much for being calm. Harry was reminded of a kettle steaming and whistling – ready to explode. Snape’s breathing was harsh, and Harry knew his face was a marvel in shock.

“Wha – “

“You’re going to cease your obsessive stalking of the Weasley girl,” Snape said.

“What does that have to do with anything?” Harry attempted to wriggle his wrists in order to escape the firm hold Snape had on them. It was so bizarre to see Snape’s long yellow fingers wrapped around his own tan skin.

Snape tightened his hold on Harry’s wrists, squeezed once and said, “I’m going to teach you why you should mind your insolence around me. You need to think long and hard about what I can offer you.”

Harry blinked. “What?”

Releasing Harry’s wrists, Snape stepped down off the platform and spun around in a whirl of robes and crossed his arms in front of his chest, tapping his wand against one forearm.

“Prepare yourself, Potter. I’m quite eager to see if you’ll enjoy this.”

What the fuck was Snape talking ab—

Oh, my God.

Something thick and hard was filling his arse. No, it had to be his imagination. Harry gritted his teeth and willed away whatever it was that was stretching him. The thickness did no go away, however, as inch by inch of something hard materialised. He felt it push against the pucker of his arse and outward, and Harry couldn’t think. He grabbed the edge of the desk, white-knuckled, and gasped for breath.

“What – did – you – do?”

He couldn’t bear to look up to see Snape’s expression. “No less than you deserve,” Snape said from nearby.

Harry hated to think of what his face looked like now – gasping mouth open, sucking in breaths, eyes closed in pain/pleasure (he didn’t understand, he didn’t), and sweat beading at his temples.

Leaning forward and then pushing back again, trying to alleviate some of the pressure building in his arsehole – muscles clamping, clenching, oh God - Harry found himself pushing down on whatever it was and he let out a small whimpering moan.

“Do you like it, Potter?” Snape asked. “Do you like what I’m doing to you?”

Harry gasped as his jeans rubbed against his cock, caught in the leg, and his clothes felt so confining. He wanted to get them off so that he could make the thing move properly…

No, no, that’s not what he meant.

“You’ve no idea what it is, do you?” Snape asked. It might have been interest, but Harry wasn’t sure. He rocked back and forth on whatever the hell Snape had conjured from thin air, right in the depth of his arsehole and when the hard material – plastic? wood? – grazed over a spot in him, Harry cried out and fought not to blush, and failed miserably.

“No,” Harry choked out, gaining a grip on his sanity as his body accustomed to the pain. The friction against his cock felt incredible and he fought not to rub it – oh fuck, yes - against the inseam.

“That Mr Potter,” Snape said, utilising the full force of his professorial voice, “is a dildo.”

“A – what?”

But even as the words were out, Harry recalled hours spent in the boys’ dormitory and Seamus and Dean going on and on about Lavender Brown’s sex toy collection, and once Fred Weasley had stolen it and licked it in the common room on a dare –

“Oh,” Harry said, as he imagined what Fred’s tongue had looked like, shiny and purple-red, flickering across the fluorescent green edge of the dildo.

When Harry wondered what it’d be like if Snape took out the dildo, licked it and then shoved it back in, he knew he’d gone certifiably insane.

“Please, oh God, please – stop,” he choked.

Snape chuckled, and he was definitely in front of Harry, definitely savouring each and every moment.

“I’ll increase the speed, Mr Potter, if you look up.”

Harry was silent as stars burst behind his eyelids and he could no longer comprehend what Snape was saying. Heat was curling low in his abdomen and he was going to tip over the edge any minute now. He thrust up against the desk, knowing he probably looked like an utter loon. In a fit of insanity, he thought about the fact that Malfoy had sat here and Harry felt even more desperate - if that was possible.

Snape whispered something under his breath and the dildo began fucking him in earnest up and down, and almost feeling as if it was side-to-side, too. Harry could barely understand which way he was sitting, let alone which way he was being fucked. As his body tingled and his arsehole stretched even further around the dildo as it widened, and even as he was whimpering in pain, Harry found the ability to speak.

“Why?”

“Look up, Potter.”

Harry forced his neck up, knowing he would be manhandled into looking up if he didn’t acquiesce.

Harry met Snape’s eyes and he couldn’t hold himself together long enough to retrieve his answer. He fell apart, wracked with pleasure, bucking on the dildo as much as his jeans would allow – confined, restricted, but synapses sparking.

And when Harry looked into Snape’s eyes for the answer that still hovered in his mind after a blissful, confused orgasm, Snape whispered one word: Obliviate.


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[info]snarry_fan7
2008-12-06 10:28 pm UTC (link)
Excellent, hot work! I like the dark feel of it, though I'm a bit sad that Snape Obliviated Harry at the end, lol. Well done!~Sophia

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[info]bewarethesmirk
2008-12-16 09:27 pm UTC (link)
Thank you, Sophia! The dark atmosphere came a bit naturally because I couldn't figure out how to establish Harry's attraction for Snape in so few words - and I knew Eey was okay with dub/non-con. :D

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[info]torino10154
2008-12-06 10:35 pm UTC (link)
I really like the way Harry seems absolutely stunned. I can totally picture his face, mouth hanging open in shock, horror, and perhaps delight all at once. Very nice work.

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[info]bewarethesmirk
2008-12-16 09:28 pm UTC (link)
I'm glad you could envision it! :D Thank you.

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[info]venturous
2008-12-06 10:37 pm UTC (link)
oh you evil Snape, you devious devil, dishing up the detention delight! That's our old Potions Master!

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[info]bewarethesmirk
2008-12-16 09:28 pm UTC (link)
That's our old Potions Master!

*grins* That he is! :D

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[info]vl_redreign
2008-12-06 10:58 pm UTC (link)
Oh, DAYAM!!!!!

Okay, that was...I'm not sure what that was. lol To say it was good dimishes the impact somehow. The ending was very appropriately Snape-ish. [info]eeyore9990 said to read this, so here I am!

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[info]bewarethesmirk
2008-12-16 09:29 pm UTC (link)
*blushes* I'm so pleased you liked it.

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[info]stormbird85
2008-12-07 07:06 am UTC (link)
OMG. I'm shocked, but I think in a good way. Or not? I can't decide it yet. OMG. I have to read it again. Oh, hell.

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[info]bewarethesmirk
2008-12-16 09:32 pm UTC (link)
Oh, I totally understand your reaction. This is a fic that leaves you hanging, unsure about how you felt. :)

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[info]drachenmina
2008-12-07 07:35 am UTC (link)
Oh, that was wicked! And the title was perfect! :D

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[info]bewarethesmirk
2008-12-16 09:33 pm UTC (link)
Thank you! I'm a bit impressed at how easily titles come to me these days, whereas summaries are such a pain in the arse.

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[info]snarrysgirl
2008-12-07 08:43 am UTC (link)
ahh! that was amazing! I have faith that Harry will put it together later on, despite the Obliviate, and they'll live happily ever after ;) lol. Loved it! Great work!

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[info]bewarethesmirk
2008-12-16 09:34 pm UTC (link)
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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[info]carpet_diemon
2008-12-07 11:28 am UTC (link)
Very hot. I love the open ending.... and the question of whose eyes he's watching now.

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[info]bewarethesmirk
2008-12-16 09:35 pm UTC (link)
Oh, hai there. I'm glad you enjoyed this! And this:

and the question of whose eyes he's watching now.

Is delicious. Perhaps he's watching Mr. Malfoy.

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[info]syrosis
2008-12-07 02:13 pm UTC (link)
Gah! So hot! And the ending killed me!

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[info]bewarethesmirk
2008-12-16 09:35 pm UTC (link)
Thank you! :D I'll assume that you being killed was an optimal reaction.

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[info]orions_stars
2008-12-08 01:39 pm UTC (link)
Whoa.

It was more effective for its relative brevity, I think.

That is all.

p.s. except: excellent title!

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[info]bewarethesmirk
2008-12-16 09:37 pm UTC (link)

It was more effective for its relative brevity, I think.


Thank you! That's very interesting feedback for me to know as an author. I prefer punchy, concise details to long-winded ones.

And I'm glad you liked the title! Sometimes they just pop in my head, and sometimes I have to slap some lame-arse title on.

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[info]szefi
2008-12-08 01:54 pm UTC (link)
This was hot.

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[info]bewarethesmirk
2008-12-16 09:38 pm UTC (link)
thank you. :D

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[info]verdenia
2008-12-09 06:19 am UTC (link)
wow. wicked is a good word! intense, nasty, dirty, hot, wicked Snape. yes. wow. great twist and intense!

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[info]bewarethesmirk
2008-12-16 09:39 pm UTC (link)
Thank you. :D :D I love that it is wicked. And intense. Or that it came across that way, rather. :D

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[info]elvirablue
2008-12-09 03:32 pm UTC (link)
“I was pondering how to best allow the punishment to – ah – sink in.” There was a wry twist of Snape’s lips.

With hindsight, I should have guessed what he was planning to do, but I was as clueless as Harry. I really liked the lack of preparation before the hotness started.

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[info]bewarethesmirk
2008-12-16 09:40 pm UTC (link)
Actually, when I wrote that line, I had no idea Snape was planning to Obliviate Harry. It was a surprise to me. ;-) But I'm glad you liked it, and the lack of preparation.

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[info]la_dissonance
2008-12-11 01:40 am UTC (link)
Oh my, this is so cool! Regular detention fic, except not, because it got all twisty and yummy. *g*

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[info]bewarethesmirk
2008-12-16 09:40 pm UTC (link)
I'm so happy you liked it!

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[info]hambares
2008-12-11 10:40 am UTC (link)
Delicious! But I am sad that Severus felt the need to Obliviate Harry.

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[info]bewarethesmirk
2008-12-16 09:41 pm UTC (link)
But I am sad that Severus felt the need to Obliviate Harry.

Aww. Given the nature of the fic and the nature of this sexual encounter, it doesn't bode well for a happy relationship.

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[info]ravenna_c_tan
2008-12-12 10:43 pm UTC (link)
Oh, that was absolutely delicious. God, I could read a whole series like this... and for all we know, Snape did it to him again, and again... and Harry none the wiser. :)

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[info]bewarethesmirk
2008-12-16 09:42 pm UTC (link)
Oh, that was absolutely delicious.

Thank you, dear. ♥

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[info]eeyore9990
2008-12-14 07:09 pm UTC (link)
Hee, I had to come back and reread. OMG, this is just as good on the five billionth read as it is on the first. So twisted and wicked and lovely and hot. Just so very exactly Snape. My main goal this read through was to form a coherent response for you (the first I left over on LJ was just... not, lol) but I think I'm not going to be able to do it this time either. The response you evoke with this is just so visceral that it really is hard to pin it down with words.

But I'll try. :D

You took my prompts and wove them into such a wonderfully corrupt tale of abuse of power (whee! kink!!) and did it so skillfully! I am left tingling every time I read this (and I've literally been back at least once per day). It is so very perfectly the sort of fic I just love to tiny pieces, because it is gritty and real and provokes the Muahahaha factor. No matter how many times I read this, I want to just chuckle evilly at the end. Maybe a bit of wicked-gleeful handrubbing. :D Seriously, you're awesome.

I can't WAIT for tomorrow.

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[info]bewarethesmirk
2008-12-16 09:48 pm UTC (link)
Wow, I answer my comments on LJ, and then I come to IJ and here is another comment!!!! :D

The response you evoke with this is just so visceral that it really is hard to pin it down with words.</i. No, you have no idea how happy that makes me. I don't need eloquent, spot-on words. When I read things I love, I have that feeling too and it's really hard to describe. :D I'm so happy I was able to write something you enjoyed! You're the best recipient ever, because you make me feel like a million dollars.

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[info]bewarethesmirk
2008-12-16 09:48 pm UTC (link)
Er, ignore the lack of an </i> ;-)

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[info]laurapetri
2008-12-16 10:43 am UTC (link)
OMG!!HOT!

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[info]bewarethesmirk
2008-12-16 09:42 pm UTC (link)
:D :D

Thanks! *bows*

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[info]leela_cat
2009-01-12 10:26 pm UTC (link)
Oh, that last line takes this story to the next level, twisting it into something that's just that bit different. Very nicely done.

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[info]bewarethesmirk
2009-01-13 01:22 am UTC (link)
Thank you very much. :D

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