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snarryhols ([info]snarryhols) wrote in [info]snarry_holidays,
@ 2008-12-06 10:00:00

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Entry tags:fic, giftee: entrenous88, rated: nc-17

Fic: A Time to Forget
Title: A Time to Forget
Author: [info]gatewaygirl
Giftee: [info]entrenous88
Word Count: 24,796
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Harry/Severus (references to others)
Warnings: Epilogue-compliant
Disclaimer: All Harry Potter characters herein are the property of J.K. Rowling and Bloomsbury/Scholastic. No copyright infringement is intended.
Summary: Harry had expected teaching at Hogwarts, even temporarily, would have complications -- his children, for instance. But when he goes exploring in the dungeons, the past moves inexorably into his present.
Author's Notes: Entrenous88: I didn't use any of your specific prompts, but I hope my attention to your desired subgenres makes up for it. Merry Christmas! To my beta readers: Thank you both for letting me know what worked for you and what didn't, and for putting up with a long fic on a short schedule.

A Time to Forget

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[info]red_day_dawning
2008-12-06 10:47 am UTC (link)
Oh, this is good. So, so good. Satisfying.
It's intriguing watching the plot unfold, and I really like the way it's written, the tone of it.
I was shocked by the young Severus - the way he seemed so different from the later Severus. More... sly and bitter, and less harsh and sour than the later Severus. It was fascinating to see that difference, and very convincing.
I would have loved more sex - but that's because the sex was good, and it's my greed speaking, rather than a criticism.

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[info]gatewaygirl
2008-12-15 08:11 pm UTC (link)
Thank you! I tried to take into account both later Severus and Severus in his school memories when writing him regressed to that time.

It took them an awfully long time to do anything, didn't it? I don't think I could have made it happen any sooner, though.

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