I think I love your review! lol. I'm so glad you enjoyed it, I'm glad you picked out some of my favourite things as well. The pacing was something I experimented with, because when I write, mostly it's just long ish one shots. So I experiment with different styles, and I'm glad this one worked. And the public conversation is something I've always wanted to write.
Thank you for taking the time to write this comment, and I'm so glad you enjoyed it.