Hot,hot, hot. I love what you did with Snape, how he sort of hopes Harry will read him, then pulls away when Harry doesn't get it. I love this line : "I saw their names in the Prophet. Don't you think it is a little strange to name your children entirely after the dead?" I loved a lot of the voice you had for Snape and Potter. i really liked Harry's first flight on Snape's Nimbus 2000, and the "Took you long enough" line. Very good, indeed.