Wow. I am stunned by how well you blend in realism and a dream-like, timeless quality into your writing.
This story gripped me tightly from start to finish. It's a relatively simple plot, but the emotional stages and exchanges I went through along with Snape and Harry was unbelievably intense.
I cannot pinpoint my favorite sections of this fic because when a story is this well-written, it is just one immensely powerful and satisfying journey. I simply adored everything.