Thanks so much! "Well done," "I love it" I will take any and all of it! Glad you enjoyed it, it was my take on the holes in JKR's story--why would Harry give his all for wizarding society as it was, when he could do something to make it better? Glad you liked the characterization--it's my goal to paint the boys a fully as I can--I, too, adore bitter, yet deliciously bottom!Snape.
As for the sequel, it had to take a back seat to my Snarry Swap http://asylums.insanejournal.com/snarry_swap/31679.html and the Snarry-a-thon that I'm working on now. But I will finish it--it was going to be two alternate endings, but we'll see now, erm... yeah...
It probably won't be until around May, but friend me http://winoniel.insanejournal.com/ and as soon as it's posted, you'll be the first (OK, the 2nd :^) to know!