First of all, my massive apologies that I finally am getting to this. I saw it got posted but I've been buried under a pile of fabric at work and have only now surfaced.
But to the important part: I LOVED this. I love pieces that are more dialogue-centric and with how wonderfully snappy the repartee was between Harry and Snape, it made me grin all the way through. I really love what you created as an 'after' world, and the touch of how Snape was affected by the venom was really brilliant. I like seeing them with flaws and imperfections and you definitely hit the nail on the head. Ginny too was handled well.
Blaise. Was. Perfect. That's all I really have to say on that score.
In all, I really enjoyed this. I'd have loved a glimpse into their private lives and how sex would have been for Snape as partially blind and relying on touch and sound. But that's because I'm a sucker for that bit. ;o) I really loved this. Thanks my loverly Anon!