I was very impressed with this fic. I think it was well written and I loved the ending. I've also recced it on my journal. A little of what I said: "I know that in fandom, it is by definition FICTION. And so things that I and most others would never condone or encourage in real life... can become kinks instead. Titillating because they aren't REAL. That said this story is how my conscience says chan should be written... horrible. It feels real, and dark and very scary. You want to strike out and run at the same time. It makes my gut tighten and my mind scream. This is not in any way a 'feel good' fic. But it is a good fic." I hope your giftee loves it as much as I did.