Wonderful, imaginative story! It was fascinating to follow how Severus and Harry’s relationship developed “backwards” from hot sex to love and “deep fondness” as the pregnancy advanced. I grew very fond of all your characters, especially your slightly crude and (at least initially) not so nice Severus. I really enjoyed your way of depicting his and Harry’s interactions throughout, and the group effort there was to help Harry and the baby survive made me feel happy. I loved the attack scene particularly, and the conversation Severus and Harry had afterwards. It was touching and showed their feelings beautifully.