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snarryhols (snarryhols) wrote in snarry_holidays,
@ 2008-11-11 18:06:00

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fic, giftee: irana, rated: r

Fic: Mine, Yours
Title: Mine, Yours
Author: faynia and stormypups
Giftee: irana
Word Count: 11,585
Rating: R
Pairing: Severus Snape/Harry Potter, brief appearance of Ron Weasley/Hermione Granger
Warnings: N/A
Disclaimer: All Harry Potter characters herein are the property of J.K. Rowling and Bloomsbury/Scholastic. No copyright infringement is intended.
Summary: When Harry received a letter asking for help, he hadn't anticipated it being for Snape.
Author's Notes: Many thanks to R and L for being super betas. Irana, I hope you enjoy this!

Mine, Yours

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	thesewarmstars 2008-11-11 06:16 pm UTC (link)
	Yum! This was lovely. I liked Snape trying to scare Harry away but only luring him closer, and living happily ever after despite himself. (Reply to this)

	snarry_fan7 2008-11-11 06:25 pm UTC (link)
	Most grand work! I really like how things develop between the two and Snape's reaction to the bonding spell was great too. Well done!~Sophia (Reply to this)

	meri_oddities 2008-11-11 06:41 pm UTC (link)
	Oh, this was just lovely. I enjoyed it very much. I love a good forced bonding story. The letters were great. And I loved the pictures, too. Very nicely done. (Reply to this)

	auctasinistra 2008-11-11 07:01 pm UTC (link)
	Way fun. I love Christmas stories (okay, so only part of it was at Christmas, but still)! (Reply to this)

	auctasinistra 2008-11-11 07:02 pm UTC (link)
	Oh - I should add I really liked the characterization of Bill, the way he didn't take any crap from Snape. (Reply to this)

	snapesgirl_62 2008-11-11 07:25 pm UTC (link)
	Very nicely done. I enjoyed how much Severus became filled with the holiday spirit. :D (Reply to this)

	lilyseyes 2008-11-11 11:24 pm UTC (link)
	Very nice! I like how Harry's Slytherin side came out with the bond! And the pictures! Loved the pictures! (Reply to this)

	alienor77310 2008-11-12 03:20 am UTC (link)
	That was wonderful. I loved Snape's drunken letter :-) (Reply to this)

	odogoddess 2008-11-12 03:31 am UTC (link)
	Aw... hot & sweet. :) That was delightful. (Reply to this)

	svartalfur 2008-11-12 06:36 am UTC (link)
	Very lovely. I especially liked their correspondence and the presents. (Reply to this)

	sweetmelodykiss 2008-11-12 08:06 am UTC (link)
	Ooh, that was just lovely! (Reply to this)

	zephre 2008-11-12 12:10 pm UTC (link)
	ha, this was excellent, a great evening's read. I love seeing Snape and Harry do different and interesting things after the war. Win! (Reply to this)

	syrosis 2008-11-12 03:40 pm UTC (link)
	How sweet! I really enjoyed reading this, Anon. :) (Reply to this)

	ivylady 2008-11-12 05:32 pm UTC (link)
	I love forced bonding stories, and this one is a treat. I like the banter between Bill and Severus--for all of his snarkiness, it seems he actually likes the man. I like how sneaky Harry is in bonding himself and Severus. The ending was nice. (Reply to this)

	jin_fenghuang 2008-11-12 07:42 pm UTC (link)
	The way he tricked Snape was awesome! Also YAY posessive!Snape Great job! (Reply to this)

	slashpine 2008-11-13 12:18 am UTC (link)
	Sweet! Very enjoyable Ron & Hermione and Bill, too! The Snape-Bill dynamic was terrific, and very believable. (Reply to this)

dwarfandelf
2008-11-13 11:22 am UTC (link)

Oh, I liked this! :-)

Sev giving Harry a watch that tells Harry "when is time for sex" made me laugh. But not while I was reading - I was too absorbed into the romantic moment...later when I thought about it, it just seemed like such a funny thing. Specially the way he said it, your friends will not be able to see it -- I can just imagine Harry visiting with Ron and Hermione and then glances at his wrist watch, sees Severus wants sex; oops, I gotta go now, see you later guys. lol

Anyway... I did love the story! The drunken letter...that was a pure desire.

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*melts from the happy*

irana
2008-11-13 10:36 pm UTC (link)

Okay, first off, let me just say I knew I was going to like this from this line right here: In fact, he said you're the only person he'll consider to look him over," Bill said, chuckling. "High praise, that." Even if I hadn't already known the pairing, that last bit is so very much what someone would say of Snape it totally clues you in.

Specific loves:
How do you tell a man who has loathed you for the majority of your life that you'd been watching him sleep? That you'd told him the most personal things you'd ever told anyone? How do you tell him that you think you need him? Gods... so much confusion and frustration there. *cuddles Harry*

The only real question was: would Snape ever forgive him for it? Oh Harry. *sighs*

"I wouldn't have done it if I didn't want to," Potter pointed out. Um, Severus love, he's trying to tell you something here. You're missing it.

The letter followed the way of the first into the fire, albeit not until he had read it half a dozen times. He assumed the letters would stop as he never responded, but they kept coming ROTFLMAO!!! Oh Severus... you blind, clueless, delightful man.

Snape took a kind of smug satisfaction knowing that when he threw the letter into the fire, the bird would go away. Yup... that's Snape to a tee. Love it.

Apparently, this only encouraged Potter, as his letters became novellas. *dies laughing* Do you know, this is the first time I've actually laughed out loud in days? Honestly.

Dear stars above the second letter! *squirms in seat* Um, yes... adored the possessiveness. Jealous much, Severus? And whew, damn but honestly... can I just be Harry for the length of that letter? I love epistolary bits in fics, how did you know?

"Did Christmas explode in your flat?" Priceless!

General loves:
I adore that is was an Au fic. Au, post-war, post-Hogwarts fics are my favorites and I especially enjoy Healer Harry. I adored the fact that Harry sat with Snape while he recovered, the realizations he came do when Snape died. And so much love for the fact it's a bonding fic as well. *hugs the mystery author*

Oh my gods, the letters had me giggling my ass off. Thank you so much... you've no idea how badly I needed this. Thank you so much for such a wonderful gift.

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	venturous 2008-11-14 09:52 pm UTC (link)
	I love this story - Healer Harry, determined!Harry, possessive!Snape ("I. Dont. Share." -- guh!) and the delicious anticipation of the inevitable. And ending up with sharing gifts, awwwww. What a wonderful Snarry Holiday! (Reply to this)

	zeltkaiserin 2008-11-15 12:53 pm UTC (link)
	okay that was incredibly sweet and just yes. that letter- smoking hot but also uproarious. excellent work. (Reply to this)

	winoniel 2008-11-17 10:18 pm UTC (link)
	Love the xmas motif! My favorite parts were the drunken letter and naughty postcards, followed by just the snark of the epistolary series in general. The sex was yummy! Well done! (Reply to this)

	entrenous88 2008-11-18 03:19 pm UTC (link)
	Ah, the letters were fantastic, especially Snape's drunk and randy one. Love the idea of him being so jealous and possessive. (Reply to this)

	orions_stars 2008-11-19 09:35 am UTC (link)
	I love a persistent, stubborn Harry. And I love letters in fic! My parents were separated for quite a while during their engagement (before international phone calls were affordable) so perhaps it's genetic. And Snape's letter and the sex were HOT. Thanks so much for the great read! (Reply to this)

	leela_cat 2008-11-22 10:01 pm UTC (link)
	A lovely forced bonding story made even better by the fact that it was Harry who forced the bonding. For Snape's own good, of course. Great sex, and the letters were wonderful also. (Reply to this)

	szefi 2008-11-29 07:47 am UTC (link)
	Loved Healer Harry, and his stubborness to save Severus. The letters were funny and Snape's long answer just pure hotness, very nice touch. (Reply to this)

	angela_snape 2008-12-05 05:40 pm UTC (link)
	This is really good! I love forced bonding, and this one with the bond to cure the curse? Fantastic. That first kiss is fabulous... this fic hit so many of my kinks it's as if it was written for me. (Reply to this)

	Desperate to know cindygirl 2009-01-02 08:29 pm UTC (link)
	I fell in love with this story. It was so many things--funny, sweet, sexy, witty. Does anyone know who the author was. I would love to read more stories by "We Shall Give You A Clue." Wish I had a clue as to the author. (Reply to this)