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snarryhols (snarryhols) wrote in snarry_holidays,
@ 2008-11-09 10:10:00

Entry tags:

fic, giftee: leela_cat, rated: nc-17

Fic: Another Fine Mess
Title: Another Fine Mess
Author: lilyseyes
Giftee: leela_cat
Word Count:12,648
Rating :NC-17/Adult
Pairing: SS/HP
Warnings: *AU, teacher/student, underage (teenage) sex, accidental bonding, young bottom!Snape*
Disclaimer: All Harry Potter characters herein are the property of J.K. Rowling and Bloomsbury/Scholastic. No copyright infringement is intended. JKR owns the Potterverse – I just play in it. No money is made from these amateur works.
Summary: An accident with a Time Turner has unexpected consequences for Severus Snape, especially when Harry comes to his rescue.
A/N: Thanks to my wonderful betas – you are each worth your weight in gold! All remaining mistakes are all mine.

I so hope you like your gift,

leela_cat!

Another Fine Mess

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	orions_stars 2008-11-18 12:40 pm UTC (link)
	Earlier this fest, I got to read child-Harry, and now you've written child-Severus! Thanks so much for writing this, I really enjoyed reading it! (Reply to this) (Thread)

	lilyseyes 2008-12-15 07:58 pm UTC (link)
	Thank you so much! (Reply to this) (Parent)

entrenous88
2008-11-19 04:48 pm UTC (link)

I loved loved loved this! Poor baby Severus, so wary and ready to flinch. Harry taking care of a toddler and then a little boy without knowing much about him was wonderful. Of course the bond went all wonky -- just their luck -- but aren't we all glad it did! :D

Ah, that bit of angst in the middle with Severus looking around in disdain and seemingly being completely done with Harry totally made my heart ache.

Wonderful fic. I know I'll re-read and enjoy this again and again.

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	lilyseyes 2008-12-15 07:58 pm UTC (link)
	Thank you for your kind words! (Reply to this) (Parent)

	verdenia 2008-11-20 04:25 am UTC (link)
	Very cool take on Time Turners and de-aging! The flecks are a great story element and this is a really neat point in canon to insert a story! Brava! :D (Reply to this) (Thread)

	lilyseyes 2008-12-15 07:59 pm UTC (link)
	I am so glad you liked the story! (Reply to this) (Parent)

	szefi 2008-11-22 08:35 am UTC (link)
	De-aged Severus - pure love! And a very original idea to re-age him:-) (I hope you plan to write a sequel - I would so gladly continue reading in this universe) (Reply to this) (Thread)

	lilyseyes 2008-12-15 07:59 pm UTC (link)
	Thank you so much! (Reply to this) (Parent)

	angela_snape 2008-11-22 06:29 pm UTC (link)
	Mmm... I love bonding fics, especially when the bond is performed accidentally. leela_cat is a lucky, lucky recipient! (Reply to this) (Thread)

	lilyseyes 2008-12-15 08:00 pm UTC (link)
	Thank you so much for all your encouragement! (Reply to this) (Parent)

	eeyore9990 2008-11-30 08:50 pm UTC (link)
	Whee! Lovely, lovely fic. I adored young!Severus and Harry was so incredible with him. Then the smutty goodness and the awkward teenage fumbling, yum! LOVED it! (Reply to this) (Thread)

	lilyseyes 2008-12-15 08:01 pm UTC (link)
	Thanks so much for all your help! (Reply to this) (Parent)

elvirablue
2008-12-02 03:03 pm UTC (link)

Lovely! I really enjoyed seeing Harry take such a good care of young Severus. The way Harry noticed and recognized his all too familiar reactions was sad, but realistic. It was exciting to follow Severus’ journey back to adulthood as he remembered new things and watch the effect every new ”Time seizure” had on their relationship. The sex was wonderful - hot and awkward and sweet.

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	lilyseyes 2008-12-15 08:01 pm UTC (link)
	Thank you for your kind words! (Reply to this) (Parent)

meglw0228
2008-12-16 05:39 am UTC (link)

Well was just going through and reading everything now that the authors were revealed... and omg, wow! I always love everything from you and this was absolutely no exception! Amazing work! I loved the progression of Harry and Severus' relationship. Very interesting time/de-age premise! Only thing I didn't like was that it ended, lol...as I got closer to the end I kept thinking what Voldermort was doing for those past three weeks and if he had called Severus, and the problems it may have caused with his spying...but lol I'll keep wondering in my head!

Wonderful job!!!

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	lilyseyes 2008-12-23 11:20 am UTC (link)
	Thank you so much for your kind words! (Reply to this) (Parent)

	jadzialove 2008-12-28 04:11 pm UTC (link)
	Well that was great fun. What a nice throwback to the Snarrys that were being written when I first started reading the pairing. Nice nostalgia with sprinkles of new canon. And not only was it an accidental bond, but it had a de-aged Snape: two of my very favorite things. (Reply to this) (Thread)

	lilyseyes 2008-12-28 04:52 pm UTC (link)
	Thank you so much for your kind words, I am so glad you liked the story! (Reply to this) (Parent)

accioslash
2009-01-08 05:26 pm UTC (link)

Oh, I can't believe I didn't comment on this one before! I was just going back and adding my favorite fics from this fest into my bookmarks and noticed that I must have only squeed to myself. With the exception of the Breathe Series which is a classic unto itself, this is probably my favorite of your fics. Really lovely hon. Heart-warming, sweet, and such an original twist on, well, several fandom tropes. Really, this was awesome.

I loved how caring Harry was with Snape and I loved the development of their relationship. Your pacing was perfect and your characterization was excellent. And the sex! I loved how realistic it was. That just made it hotter. Great job!

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	lilyseyes 2009-01-10 11:46 pm UTC (link)
	Thank you for your lovely words - you are always so encouraging to me! Thank you for your lovely comments and your on-going support! It means so much! (Reply to this) (Parent)

	terrible_tues 2009-01-15 05:19 am UTC (link)
	Well written. (Reply to this) (Thread)

	lilyseyes 2009-01-23 03:01 pm UTC (link)
	Thank you! (Reply to this) (Parent)

	winnett 2009-01-19 05:29 pm UTC (link)
	what a lovely story. I enjoy de-aging fics and I liked both your premise and the progression as Snape re-aged. My only wish is for more! What happens next. grin But I understand the next great fic needs to be written. Thanks for writing! (Reply to this) (Thread)

	lilyseyes 2009-01-23 03:02 pm UTC (link)
	I am thrilled that you enjoye the story! Hmmm, the next part...perhaps! (Reply to this) (Parent)

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