Tweak

InsaneJournal

Tweak says, "I am NOT a committee!"

snarryhols (snarryhols) wrote in snarry_holidays,
@ 2008-11-09 10:10:00

Entry tags:

fic, giftee: leela_cat, rated: nc-17

Fic: Another Fine Mess
Title: Another Fine Mess
Author: lilyseyes
Giftee: leela_cat
Word Count:12,648
Rating :NC-17/Adult
Pairing: SS/HP
Warnings: *AU, teacher/student, underage (teenage) sex, accidental bonding, young bottom!Snape*
Disclaimer: All Harry Potter characters herein are the property of J.K. Rowling and Bloomsbury/Scholastic. No copyright infringement is intended. JKR owns the Potterverse – I just play in it. No money is made from these amateur works.
Summary: An accident with a Time Turner has unexpected consequences for Severus Snape, especially when Harry comes to his rescue.
A/N: Thanks to my wonderful betas – you are each worth your weight in gold! All remaining mistakes are all mine.

I so hope you like your gift,

leela_cat!

Another Fine Mess

Page 1 of 2
<<	[1] [2]	>>

(Post a new comment)

littleblackbow
2008-11-09 10:26 am UTC (link)

HooooooMG.. VERY VERY nice. :D

Okay, this is just what I needed today. It's not too fluffy, but it's great fun, and an awesome premise. I love the happy ending, too.

And playing with time-turners for the WIN!!! Seriously, there's so much potential in that little device, and I don't think people ~~abuse~~ use it nearly enough.

The sex was incredibly hot, and I love how their relationship twists and turns at each... twist and turn. :P

Leela_cat is so lucky! Seriously!!

(Reply to this) (Thread)

lilyseyes, 2008-12-15 06:54 pm UTC

	halsangel_1 2008-11-09 10:29 am UTC (link)
	This was spectacular. I really enjoyed this. Angie (Reply to this) (Thread)

lilyseyes, 2008-12-15 06:54 pm UTC

	nonajf 2008-11-09 11:18 am UTC (link)
	A new twist on the de-aging! I really liked the embedded flecks and the random Time seizures. It was nice to watch the relationship grow. (Reply to this) (Thread)

lilyseyes, 2008-12-15 06:59 pm UTC

	snapesgirl_62 2008-11-09 11:32 am UTC (link)
	I really enjoyed all the twists and changes as their relationship grows. This was very well done. (Reply to this) (Thread)

lilyseyes, 2008-12-15 07:00 pm UTC

	laurapetri 2008-11-09 12:13 pm UTC (link)
	Nice twist on the time turner deaging fic (Reply to this) (Thread)

lilyseyes, 2008-12-15 07:00 pm UTC

	snarry_fan7 2008-11-09 12:25 pm UTC (link)
	Most excellent and creative work! I really like how their relationship develops as Severus ages and I also love the ending. Well done.~Sophia (Reply to this) (Thread)

lilyseyes, 2008-12-15 07:01 pm UTC

	shinalaris 2008-11-09 12:26 pm UTC (link)
	This was a great read. I really like the fresh twist on de-aging, and I like the progression of their relationship. (Reply to this) (Thread)

lilyseyes, 2008-12-15 07:01 pm UTC

	umbrus 2008-11-09 12:41 pm UTC (link)
	wow, I love this new take one timer turner usage and their relationship rebuilding from ground 0. Your version of young Severus is so cute but still true to character. leela_cat is very lucky to receive this. Wonderful job! (Reply to this) (Thread)

lilyseyes, 2008-12-15 07:07 pm UTC

	the_minx_17 2008-11-09 02:13 pm UTC (link)
	Delightful! I love seeing something familiar used in a new way. And, really, is there a need to mention the hotness? Thanks for sharing and making a lazy Sunday afternoon more fun, Mystery Critter! (Reply to this) (Thread)

lilyseyes, 2008-12-15 07:08 pm UTC

the_minx_17, 2008-12-15 08:32 pm UTC

	gatewaygirl 2008-11-09 02:45 pm UTC (link)
	Oh, brilliant! The way you have him re-age from pieces of the broken Time-Turner is clever, and I love little Severus saying his name is "Boy", and Harry understanding immediately. The relationship evolves nicely. I think there could be a little more of Severus reevaluating, but that's a tricky call, since you don't want too much recap at the end of a story. (Reply to this) (Thread)

lilyseyes, 2008-12-15 07:11 pm UTC

	sweetmelodykiss 2008-11-09 05:33 pm UTC (link)
	Ooh, that was just wonderful. I enjoyed this so much. Very well done! (Reply to this) (Thread)

lilyseyes, 2008-12-15 07:12 pm UTC

	torino10154 2008-11-09 08:05 pm UTC (link)
	Great story-I love Time Turners, so much great potential. Sweet little Severus! Harry so good taking care of him. And of course Severus would have to have a conniption once he reached a certain age. :P Hot yummy sex and a happy ending! Nice work. (Reply to this) (Thread)

lilyseyes, 2008-12-15 07:14 pm UTC

	thesewarmstars 2008-11-09 08:56 pm UTC (link)
	Oh, that was just lovely! Very creative use of a Time-Turner, Severus' personality is amazing. Loved it! (Reply to this) (Thread)

lilyseyes, 2008-12-15 07:14 pm UTC

leela_cat
2008-11-10 08:33 am UTC (link)

I like my gift very much, thank you so much.

I'm sorry for the delay in commenting but Bascon ate my brain this weekend. This made wonderful bedtime reading, btw.

I love the time turner and that the accident which de-ages Severus is completely accidental and ordinary and muggle-based. The shards of time turner, and the seizures and the slow growth of their relationship as Severus ages is wonderful. Also the way that Lily's love and Severus' original vow morphs the bond.

And, honestly, I could keep going, but...

Thank you so very much. This was wonderful and met so many of kinks.

(Reply to this) (Thread)

lilyseyes, 2008-12-15 07:05 pm UTC

	eriador117 2008-11-10 09:39 am UTC (link)
	That was lovely! I even managed to surprise myself and read the bottom!Snape scene without wincing, LOL! Two lost souls finally together, wonderful! (Reply to this) (Thread)

lilyseyes, 2008-12-15 07:15 pm UTC

	syrosis 2008-11-10 04:25 pm UTC (link)
	This was lovely! I really enjoyed reading from beginning to end. :) (Reply to this) (Thread)

lilyseyes, 2008-12-15 07:17 pm UTC

	odogoddess 2008-11-10 09:47 pm UTC (link)
	This was delightful. Sweet, scrummy and smutty all at once. Wonderful job! (Reply to this) (Thread)

lilyseyes, 2008-12-15 07:17 pm UTC

	phoenixdragonsphinx (Anonymous) 2008-11-10 11:06 pm UTC (link)
	Wonderful!!! I love the dynamic! (Reply to this) (Thread)

Re: phoenixdragonsphinx -

lilyseyes, 2008-12-15 07:17 pm UTC

	jin_fenghuang 2008-11-11 07:14 am UTC (link)
	Awww, ickle!severus just broke my heart. sniff At least they got a happy ending! (Reply to this) (Thread)

lilyseyes, 2008-12-15 07:18 pm UTC

	zephre 2008-11-12 12:15 pm UTC (link)
	fantastic! vulnerable!Severus and protective!Harry FTW! (Reply to this) (Thread)

dwarfandelf, 2008-11-13 11:35 am UTC

zephre, 2008-11-13 11:37 am UTC

dwarfandelf, 2008-11-13 11:47 am UTC

lilyseyes, 2008-12-15 07:18 pm UTC

	charie-caphine.livejournal.com 2008-11-12 01:13 pm UTC (link)
	The author deserves a momument and an lifetime-long supply of all earthly (and otherwise) goods. (Reply to this) (Thread)

lilyseyes, 2008-12-15 07:19 pm UTC

dwarfandelf
2008-11-13 11:34 am UTC (link)

I simply adore young Severus and here he was just perfect and wonderful at each age. I love him so much...the brave three year old drinking skelegro without complaint *hugs his* the prideful and already angsty 7 year old that wanted to leave because he was not wanted *smothers him* the young teenager with "wiry long muscles" *...* and so on. :-) And Harry was a pure sweetness, just the way I like them. The only thing that is not "perfect" as far as I am concerned, is that Severus explained that he came back because the bond somehow forced him, not because he wanted to of his own free will. :-( But other than that I just love them and everything that happened! :-) I want to make a special note of Dudley barging in and seeing Sev and Harry kissing -- that was great!! *hugs*

(Reply to this) (Thread)

lilyseyes, 2008-12-15 07:19 pm UTC

	alisanne 2008-11-15 10:38 am UTC (link)
	happy sigh This was simply wonderful. I LOVE deaged fics where they have the opportunity to get to know each other without the extra baggage, so yay! Poor Severus, it's a good thing he had Harry to take care of him. And now I'm betting Severus takes care of Harry for the rest of their lives. g Wonderful job, mystery author! :) (Reply to this) (Thread)

lilyseyes, 2008-12-15 07:28 pm UTC

	carpet_diemon 2008-11-16 01:21 pm UTC (link)
	Ooooh. That was perfect. Lovely. Love the consideration and thought you put into the time idea. (Reply to this) (Thread)

lilyseyes, 2008-12-15 07:28 pm UTC

	winoniel 2008-11-17 05:34 pm UTC (link)
	How delicious! I really like the fact that Harry gets to watch how Severus grew into the man he was, yet manages, through his care for the young boy, to change some very important things about how his personality develops! The vow is wonderful, and beautifully unique was of de-aging! (Reply to this) (Thread)

lilyseyes, 2008-12-15 07:29 pm UTC

Page 1 of 2
<<	[1] [2]	>>