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snarryhols ([info]snarryhols) wrote in [info]snarry_holidays,
@ 2008-11-07 10:02:00

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Entry tags:fic, giftee: faynia and stormypups, rated: nc-17

Fic: A Paler Shade of Guilt
Title: A Paler Shade of Guilt
Author: [info]maraudersaffair
Giftee: [info]faynia and [info]stormypups
Word Count: 17,000
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Harry/Snape, Harry/OC (Slightly)
Warnings: Nothing the rating doesn’t already imply.
Disclaimer: All Harry Potter characters herein are the property of J.K. Rowling and Bloomsbury/Scholastic. No copyright infringement is intended.
Summary: After a deadly encounter on the job, Harry is sacked and pressured to take a job as a professor at Hogwarts. Once he arrives, Snape is waiting with a plan of his own.
Author's Notes: The recipients asked for a clichéd story about Harry returning to Hogwarts to teach. I included some h/c and, if you squint, some het thrown in there. A great thanks to my beta, B!

A Paler Shade of Guilt



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[info]snarry_fan7
2008-11-07 10:38 am UTC (link)
Most excellent work. I like bit of humor with Fitzgerald and how much she doesn't like Snape. I really like how Snape and Harry interacted throughout the whole story.~Sophia

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[info]maraudersaffair
2008-12-15 09:01 pm UTC (link)
Thanks so much, Sophia! I'm glad you enjoyed their interaction and the humor. :D

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[info]sweetmelodykiss
2008-11-07 05:22 pm UTC (link)
Excellent! I really enjoyed this, and I adored the ending. Very well done!

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[info]maraudersaffair
2008-12-15 09:01 pm UTC (link)
Thanks so much!

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[info]lilyseyes
2008-11-08 01:51 am UTC (link)
I love Harry back at Hogwarts as a professor, bumbling his way through, and Snape's *desire* to help him with his problems! Very nice!

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[info]maraudersaffair
2008-12-27 03:59 pm UTC (link)
I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for reading!

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[info]torino10154
2008-11-08 10:27 am UTC (link)
Fun fic. I always love a good Harry returns to Hogwarts fic myself. Severus is the same and yet not quite as rough around the edges, which is good. I like the way the girl sort of forces them to deal with each other. Surprisingly I really liked the way Harry put the moves on Olivianne. :D A real charmer. Great job.

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[info]maraudersaffair
2008-12-27 04:00 pm UTC (link)
Thanks so much. I'm glad I included Frita as well!

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[info]ivylady
2008-11-08 10:38 pm UTC (link)
Lovely story. I liked Harry teaching at Hogwarts and Severus not really knowing how to treat him at times. Frita was hilarious.

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[info]maraudersaffair
2008-12-27 04:00 pm UTC (link)
Thanks so much!

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[info]jin_fenghuang
2008-11-11 07:19 am UTC (link)
What a great story. Clueless!Harry and proactive!Snape FTW.
THeheh at Harry's bumbling beginning as a teacher.

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[info]maraudersaffair
2008-12-27 04:00 pm UTC (link)
So glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for reading.

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[info]stormypups
2008-11-11 11:27 am UTC (link)
Heee Bumbley!Teacher!Harry for the win!! Thank you for writing us such a nice cliche present.

I wasn't a fan of the Oliveanne bits, but it ends well for our boys, so it's all good!

Thank you!!

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[info]maraudersaffair
2008-12-27 04:01 pm UTC (link)
So relieved that you enjoyed it. Thanks so much for the prompt!

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[info]zephre
2008-11-12 01:02 pm UTC (link)
so awesome - great interaction with everyone, and wonderful hurt and comfort all around.

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[info]maraudersaffair
2008-12-27 04:03 pm UTC (link)
So glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for reading! :D

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[info]orions_stars
2008-11-18 10:47 am UTC (link)
It didn't seem that cliché to me! I really liked your Snape and Harry. It was interesting to me that Harry's so easily able to get Olivianne to bed, yet hasn't seemed to have learned the way that people try to use him. Loved Snape's attempts to save him as well. :)

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[info]maraudersaffair
2008-12-27 04:04 pm UTC (link)
Yes, that is very interesting. However, after what happened, I say he'll have a breakthrough. Thanks so much for reading!

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[info]entrenous88
2008-11-19 09:09 pm UTC (link)
Oooh, I liked this lots. Harry's smooth ways with Olivanne, his unexpected but intense obsession with Severus, his being taken in by Frita Fitzgerald -- very engaging!

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[info]maraudersaffair
2008-12-27 04:05 pm UTC (link)
I'm so glad you enjoyed the read. Thanks!

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[info]syrosis
2008-11-22 05:12 am UTC (link)
I really liked this, Anon! A flirty Harry (with Olivia; and why did those scenes make me hot? LOL!), Professor Harry, actually, Harry here was perfect! So was Snape! Gah! I really really liked this! I can't wait to find out who you are. :D

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[info]maraudersaffair
2008-12-27 04:06 pm UTC (link)
Thehehe. So glad you liked this story. Thanks so much for your wonderful review!

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[info]szefi
2008-11-22 08:19 am UTC (link)
Lovely story.

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[info]maraudersaffair
2008-12-27 04:06 pm UTC (link)
Thank you!

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[info]leela_cat
2008-11-22 10:15 pm UTC (link)
Oh, how I love that Harry didn't walk into the classroom and immediately know how to teach without any training. And Snape saving Harry because he was jealous and then being annoyed because Harry saved him again. So perfect.

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[info]maraudersaffair
2008-12-27 04:07 pm UTC (link)
Yeah, I knew that Harry wouldn't have a clue about teaching without training -- it just isn't realistic! Thanks so much for reading. :D

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