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snarryhols (snarryhols) wrote in snarry_holidays,
@ 2008-11-05 10:08:00

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fic, giftee: alisanne, rated: nc-17

Fic: One Wave Short of a Shipwreck
Title: One Wave Short of a Shipwreck
Author: leela_cat
Giftee: alisanne
Word Count: ~12,250
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Harry/Severus
Warnings: EWE, Seduction through enticing alternatives (aka Dirty Talk)
Disclaimer: Don't own them. Don't make any money from them. I just let them have a bit more fun than JKR ever did.
Summary: Severus and Harry end up in the same hospital for very different reasons. Afterwards, Hermione plots, Harry seduces, and Severus thinks he may just be going slightly mad.
A/N: alisanne, I managed to at least mention most of your kinks and requests, and get two of your optional prompts in as well. Hope you like it.
Many thanks to my amazing betas: F, M, and J.

One Wave Short of a Shipwreck

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alisanne
2008-11-05 05:15 pm UTC (link)

I've finally read my story *clutches it to chest* and all I can say is SQUEEEEEEEEEE!
I'm guessing you'd like something more coherent than that, though, so I will try. *deep breath*
Here goes.

This hooked me from the first line.
You, mystery author, have an excellent grasp not only of Severus Snape but of the dynamics of the trio and of what constitutes romantic snarking.
Ickle harry is utterly adorable, I don't blame Severus for falling for him, since I know I did.
Hermione intervening (or trying to) was perfectly her, and Severus' reaction was perfectly HIM.
You even managed to write Ron the way I like him. Not a pushover but also not unreasonable. You even made me believe Ron/Hermione as a viable couple! ;)
And the sex.... *drools* Let's just say you have an excellent grasp of what makes Snarry delectable.
You hit so many of my requests/likes that I am now suspicious that you are someone I know very well. Either that or you're simply a superb writer! Either way, THANK YOU SO MUCH!
I adored this story and I am off to pimp it in my journal.
Then I'll likely come back and read it again because it is THAT GOOD. *g*

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leela_cat
2008-12-15 07:56 pm UTC (link)

I'm so glad you liked it. I was more than a little worried, as my betas knew very well.

And, yes, I guess I am someone you know. *grins*

But, on a more serious note, there's actually a scene that I had planned to write that's missing from this version of the story. I was mortified to realise that -- after it had been posted, of course -- because I was absolutely convinced that I'd written it.

Anyway, in the next couple of weeks, I'll post it to my IJ with the additional scene and let you know that it's there. If you're curious, I can tell you what the scene is, or you can wait to be surprised.

*hugs and apologies*

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