I could feel Snape's aggravation at the beginning. I like that Harry fainted at the sight of Snape but Ginny didn't. It was so funny how Snape got little Al to stop crying. I like Ginny's characterization here. I like how eager and soft Snape was with baby Al and how he came to care for James too. I like James' characterization and his little waves to Snape were sweet, he obviously liked Snape and wanted some attention too. I liked the way Snape was fighting his attraction to Harry when he first realized it. I like what Harry says to Severus after Al says their names and they link hands. I also like the way Harry eases his way into a relationship with Snape. The UST was great and the sex scene was hot. I like how you slipped in the 'look at me' part. Overall, a very very good fic!