Aw, this was lovely! I absolutely loved how you wrote James and Albus Severus. They were too cute for words! The UST between Harry and Severus was written perfectly, as well as Severus' reluctant attitude and overall low self esteem. His interactions with the children was adorable, not to mention Harry as a dad was perfect! Just how I imagined him being. ;) Ginny was also a piece of fresh air here. I liked how you portrayed her. :)
What a light hearted story! It made me smile a lot and left a warm feeling in my belly. :)