I LOVE the reasoning Harry has behind being gay. Very realistic and in-character, at least IMO. And I like the realistic reactions of Ginny and Ron. Snape as a prostitute named The Serpent was actually funny to me. But the sex scene was great. I like that they had been pining away for each other but it took Snape's Slytherinesque plan to get them together. Hopeful Harry is a common given but I like that Snape knows it's going to work out. Great job!