Harry is a twat, and I would like nothing more than to beat him to death with an aluminum baseball bat. HOWEVER..!
I actually enjoyed most of this, and what parts I didn't are entirely attributable to the fact that you kept the wanker in character. I'm, ah, honestly rather surprised - Snarry is far from a favorite of mine, yet I enjoyed this enough to move onto the second part. That's gotta be a good sign, eh?