Thanks for the criticism. after I read your comment I went back and reviewed the fic. Again, I felt it was too soon in the game for Harry to truly know why Snape decided to sex him up. Their relationship was sudden enough, I don't think Snape was ready to show that side of him.
I should have continued it to the point where both Snape and Harry were comfortable with themselves to talk about their feelings, but time restraints prohibited it.
But, again, thanks for your comment. It was very helpful!