Oh my god. This. This was INCREDIBLE. I was SO looking forward to your story ever since you posted your plotbunny at the comm, and I knew it'd be amazing, but this? This was infinite times better than anything I had expected. Seriously. I'm blown away. Completely.
This whole dark dystopian world you created, the plot, the characters (and not just Snape and Harry - what a wonderful supporting cast!), everything. It was all so gripping and heartwrenching and felt so awfully real and had me on the edge of my seat the whole time. And amidst all the darkness and despair and heartbreaking there were these moments of love and hope and then that hopeful, uplifting, realistically "happy" ending. That "Perhaps" at the end was perfect. No, the whole thing was perfect. I was so in love I didn't want the story ever ever ever to end. EVER. It was ABSOLUTELY AMAZING.
And gah, I'm just rambling incoherently here and seem to be unable to give any real feedback. *gives up* But god, I loved this beyond words. LOVED.