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snarrymod ([info]snarrymod) wrote in [info]snarry_games,
@ 2009-09-20 09:38:00

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Entry tags:fic, snitch

Team Snitch Entry (FIC): "Rapture" by Mia Ugly
Title: Rapture
Author: Mia Ugly ([info]mia_ugly)
Team: Snitch
Genre(s): Time-Travel
Prompt(s): The Long Goodbye, Achilles Heel
Rating/Warnings/Kinks: NC17; Highlight if you wish to know: *Epilogue Compliant, non-explicit Harry/Ginny*
Word Count: ~50,000
Author Notes/Disclaimers/Betas A huge thank you to [info]whitecotton and [info]accioslash, for their tireless (and last minute) beta work. Another huge (throbbing) thank you to [info]joanwilder, who was a fantastic team capitan, an amazing beta, and a great person in general - infinitely generous and infinitely kind. Thank you to the Mods for granting me extension after extension, for being exceedingly patient, and for running this lovely fest. Thanks to all my team-mates who volunteered to help out when I was going crazy, and above all, thank you to the lovely Fast9s, who put up with my panic attacks, my late nights, and my passion for hot wizard love. And for Fast9s.


Summary: Snape sees the man, for the first time, on his twenty-fifth birthday.






"Rapture"




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[info]accioslash
2009-09-20 05:38 pm UTC (link)
If there was ever any truth to the saying "saving the best for last", this is the time. I have been waiting for this one to appear. Simply, this fic is brilliant. This is such a powerful story. I was immediately pulled into the fic and immersed headlong into the depths of some of the most clever storytelling it has been my privilege to read in this round of the Games or any other. I love the pacing and the style here. You have a real gift with mood and characterization. And the dialogue! Snape is especially well-done. It is just so very much like him to give no quarter, to be unforgiving and unrelenting and yet, to still be the man Harry learns to love.

The intensity of the piece mirrors the intensity of the men in the story. It was gripping and powerful with mystery, suspense, and a cleverly interwoven subplot that made practically every line a virtual masterpiece of storytelling. You had me at the first line and never let up until the end. Truly, a brilliant piece and an instant classic. I will be reading this one again and again. Lovely!

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(no subject) - [info]mia_ugly, 2009-09-21 03:33 am UTC

[info]veridari
2009-09-20 06:01 pm UTC (link)
RL is pulling me away until tonight...but just reading accioslash's comments is KILLING me because your fic sounds like it will be a read of LUV. I can't wait until I can get to it tonight and I'll be back with comments! Go Snitches!

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[info]whitecotton
2009-09-20 06:44 pm UTC (link)
Obviously I have already read this, but like Accioslash, was so entranced and beguiled by your ability to weave a story that I couldn't resist taking another bite by opening it up. Unfortunately I took that bite from the first line and ... and ended up making the whole a delightful feast.

Your way with words is delicious. They render the story like paint, describing every moment, every emotion and every wonderful hitch of breath. Such an indulgent story in the best style, whereby the reader is taken by the hand and swept along within it, rather than as an imapartial observer. So many times I held my breath, found myself gnawing on my lips, waiting for them to touch, to feel, and just to be together.

Marvellous, marvellous story and one that has stayed with me, heart and soul, since the first time I read it.

My Team pride also leads me to add how honoured I am to have been on Team Snitch with you, and think we could not have ended with a better showing.

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(no subject) - [info]whitecotton, 2009-09-21 01:17 am UTC
(no subject) - [info]mia_ugly, 2009-09-21 03:39 am UTC
(no subject) - [info]whitecotton, 2009-09-21 03:53 am UTC

[info]ellenru
2009-09-20 07:08 pm UTC (link)
I've been enthralled for the last 90 minutes reading this - simply amazing.

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(no subject) - [info]mia_ugly, 2009-09-21 07:02 am UTC

[info]magialuna
2009-09-20 07:36 pm UTC (link)
I usually read the warnings at the beginning and I read yours and went... oh no... ick... epilogue compliant AND Harry/Ginny!!!

Possible spoilers in review.

But I read it anyway and... I am so terribly pleased and happy and thankful that I did. It was just wonderful. (You had really scared me with that whole Harry/Ginny thing!) But your weave of time and emotion was so brilliant.

The point that killed me the MOST was when Harry finally got to back again and he showed up not to Snape but... Albus. That entire scene just ripped my heart right out of me. The only redeeming feature was that obviously Dumbledore *did* listen to Harry's words even though he professed to *not* want knowledge of the future.

The attack and rescue was brilliant as was the method that they planned to do it. I never would have thought of it... but it was a lovely way to lure out a intelligent Prophet-reading Potions Master (by the authoress obviously not the bad guys...)

So, thank you so much for this. It is really wonderful. Some stories are so rich that I almost felt I ate and slept and lived within in them while I read... this is that type.

Clare

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(no subject) - [info]mia_ugly, 2009-09-21 07:06 am UTC

[info]dreamingjewel
2009-09-20 08:33 pm UTC (link)
You have restored my faith in fanfic. Brilliant story, brilliant charactizations, and I particularly loved the glimpses into Severus's muggle life.

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(no subject) - [info]mia_ugly, 2009-09-21 07:06 am UTC

[info]loupgarou1750
2009-09-20 09:00 pm UTC (link)
This...is just unbelievably brilliant. I had to keep walking away from it as I read, because it's so beautiful I kept forgetting (how) to breath, because it's so beautiful it hurt. I'll come back, I swear I'll come back, to leave more detailed comments...once I find myself again.

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(no subject) - [info]loupgarou1750, 2009-09-20 09:27 pm UTC
(no subject) - [info]mia_ugly, 2009-09-21 07:08 am UTC

[info]rose1437
2009-09-20 09:26 pm UTC (link)
this is unbelievable. one of my top three favorite snarry fics of all time, for sure. you have a gift for story telling. thank you so much for sharing this!

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(no subject) - [info]mia_ugly, 2009-09-21 07:09 am UTC

[info]eriador117
2009-09-20 09:48 pm UTC (link)
I'm just about to go to bed, my eyes are gritty, but this was a wonderful story.

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(no subject) - [info]mia_ugly, 2009-09-21 07:14 am UTC
Damn it, I have to split this into pieces
[info]perverse_idyll
2009-09-20 11:36 pm UTC (link)
Jesus fucking God. I've been sitting here for ten minutes trying to pull myself together and not explode with flailing emotion all over this comment box. There is no way to get around saying, I LOVE THIS MORE THAN WORDS CAN TELL AND MY HEART JUST GREW FIVE TIMES ITS NORMAL SIZE, just so we're clear, but that doesn't even begin to express how I feel about this fic. And I have to admit, I made it almost all the way to the end without crying, my eyes just stinging now and then and my breath backing up in my chest, but no crying, because I am a stubborn bitch and because, damn it, it would have interfered with my ability to keep reading. And then I got to the end, and you pulled the rug out from under me by breaking the fourth wall and throwing this whole intense, private, unshakable demonstration of life-long, sacrificial love out of the fic's bounds and into the world, and I fucking lost it. *pauses to keep from bursting into tears again* Because yes, you earned that, this story earned the right to challenge canon's law and turn the whole interpretation back on itself, rewrite history, and save the unsalvageable, not just Snape's life but his whole bloody existence as a human being. You fucking broke my heart with a Severus who was damaged and careworn and bitterly defensive and deprived and still too young to completely understand why the world hurt so much and so touchingly vulnerable to the slightest hint that someone might - hell, not even love or want him, but not be repelled by him. Might think he was worth making breakfast for, OMG. I don't know how you did it, how you created a young Severus who seems a natural precursor to canon!Snape, whose traits are so recognizable but whose motives are so much deeper and more compelling and complex and heart-wrenching. (Well, yes, I do know, because I know who's the better writer. But.)

I'm sorry, I tend to fall into run-on sentences when I'm trembling with excitement. This is the sort of mow-you-down fic that sometimes happens in Snarry, that absolutely takes possession of the reader, and right now it's like every cell in my body's lit up and electrified by the sheer beauty of this fic. I mean, it's breathtaking. And one of the things that makes it unaccountably painful to read, painful because it's like the answer to a longing I've been carrying around forever and this fic is - not the antidote, but the embodiment of that longing - the thing that raises this fic into the realm of "I didn't know this was possible, how did she do that" is the way you portray the doomed, tentative, self-denying, inadmissible depth of love on both sides - both sides. Yes, it's worth repeating that. And you achieve it through the ravishes of language, of images that contain so much emotion and sorrow and humanity it's a wonder they don't burst. It make so much sense that these two young, lost souls would form a bond if allowed to meet each other on common ground. And both of them are exactly the kind of people who would give themselves, and once having given, not be able to take back, not be able to give up, not - at least in Severus' case, as the self-hating one - be able to give in. And each needs the other to save him from himself, for himself, whether he realizes it or not. My God, the whole fic sings like a cello, with its almost unbearable range of warmth and yearning. It's astonishing how you keep adding layer after layer to the heart-hammering tension between them, the tentative emotional duets - and oh, while I'm thinking about it, the sex scenes are astonishing for the way erotic discovery becomes a vehicle for such powerful interior transformation, such breaking and remolding, a physical act capable of touching their deepest beings - and without resorting to romance clichés. It rings absolutely true because of who they are and everything in their lives that has brought them to this point, which you lay bare for us with grace and economy, grit and judgment.

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Re: Damn it, I have to split this into pieces - [info]perverse_idyll, 2009-09-20 11:36 pm UTC
Re: Damn it, I have to split this into pieces - [info]perverse_idyll, 2009-09-20 11:37 pm UTC
Re: Damn it, I have to split this into pieces - [info]mia_ugly, 2009-09-21 07:56 am UTC
Re: Damn it, I have to split this into pieces - [info]mia_ugly, 2009-09-22 07:06 am UTC
Re: Damn it, I have to split this into pieces - [info]naatz, 2009-09-21 09:11 pm UTC
Re: Damn it, I have to split this into pieces - [info]perverse_idyll, 2009-09-22 03:51 am UTC
Re: Damn it, I have to split this into pieces - [info]naatz, 2009-09-22 04:30 am UTC
Re: Damn it, I have to split this into pieces - [info]literatelier, 2009-09-29 02:34 am UTC

[info]auntmuriel
2009-09-21 12:19 am UTC (link)
That was delightful and angstful and I couldn't stop reading it.
Thank you for allowing Dumbledore to meddle. I was so prepared for the canon ending and quite pleased to be wrong.
Fabulous story. Will definitely be re-read.

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(no subject) - [info]mia_ugly, 2009-09-21 07:33 am UTC

[info]hissing_nagini
2009-09-21 12:21 am UTC (link)
well... great... Whatever I wanted to say about this story, stuck in my throat after reading the review of perverse_idyll... I mean... what more can I say that wouldn't sound ridiculous inadequate after this? I cried while reading the story and now I'm crying again, after reading a REVIEW for your story... that's just... silly... what am I going to say now????

Well, I just have to agree wholeheartedly. There's nothing to add. I love every single word of your story and just reading the first sentence I knew that it would be brilliant and probably leaving me in tears... well I was right... I'm sitting here, sobbing, at half past 2 in the morning and trying to pull enough of my mediocre english out of my brian to tell you exactly how much I love this story! I fail - I don't even find the right words in my own language...

It was a worthy closure. I'm going to reread it... probably now...

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(no subject) - [info]mia_ugly, 2009-09-21 07:43 am UTC
"and then he is being kissed, kissed by a mouth that is the opposite of funerals"
(Anonymous)
2009-09-21 12:47 am UTC (link)
I've read so many stories throughout the years and thought that little could move me anymore. "Rapture" is in no way little, but has broken my heart and mended it all at once. I felt I needed to comment and tell you I cried and wished, for the first time since I can remember, for a happy ending. And truly happy endings only come after undeniably heart-wrenching sad endings. Both of which you gifted us with. This is my new "Harry Potter", perfectly fitted into reality and into my heart's wish. Thank you.

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Re: "and then he is being kissed, kissed by a mouth that is the opposite of funerals" - [info]mia_ugly, 2009-09-21 07:44 am UTC

[info]elmyraemilie
2009-09-21 12:53 am UTC (link)
That is a wonderful story. Lots of technical proficiency to delight in, but what it comes down to is the warmth in my heart at the end.

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(no subject) - [info]mia_ugly, 2009-09-21 07:40 am UTC

[info]necromanticnoir
2009-09-21 12:57 am UTC (link)
There are no words, but I must try...

I've been crying ever since Harry gave Snape the tea and Snape blushed, and gone through, like, a million tissues, two hours solid of reading this incredible story through a fog of tears...

So powerful. The most powerful story I have ever read. I can't believe that there can be things in the world as beautiful as this. I was so scared it was going to end sadly, with them trapped apart from each other. The moment I started reading your story I couldn't stop, and young Snape was just perfect in every way, nearly going mad with longing when Harry disappeared... "Where the - hell have you been?" You are so talented, every time Snape couldn't express how he felt, or Harry felt crushed, or Snape's heart broke and he pushed Harry away, I was sobbing. His awkwardness when he fell for Harry was so perfect, the way they made love was so real, so heavenly. The sentence when Snape's heart wants to soar hopelessly out of his chest with happiness is just stunning, so moving. I'm crying so much. It's nearly 2am, just wanted to say thank you for the most wonderfully powerful story I have ever read; a perfect, magical, earth-shatteringly emotional story. It is about real, true love, and I think it's one of those stories that stays with you forever. Deep, and beautiful, impossible to forget. I will read it over and over. You are amazing.

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(no subject) - [info]mia_ugly, 2009-09-21 07:47 am UTC

[info]torino10154
2009-09-21 02:39 am UTC (link)
I have no idea what to say! I'm speechless, overwhelmed. I adore time-travel, particularly Severus's circumstances-ie he knows Harry is the man that he loved and he has to wait and suffer until Harry catches up. The watch was wonderful as was Harry's inability to tell Severus about the future. Their physical relationship was just marvelous-the desperate, needy, overpowering hunger that overtook them was breathtaking. But the end, you slayed me. It wasn't until then that I broke down in tears. It never ends, never. Amazing, remarkable, spectacular story. *standing ovation*

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(no subject) - [info]mia_ugly, 2009-09-21 07:51 am UTC
(no subject) - [info]torino10154, 2009-09-21 11:40 am UTC

[info]morgana_white
2009-09-21 02:40 am UTC (link)
Like accioslash said: "If there was ever any truth to the saying "saving the best for last", this is the time." I completely agree with her. How could I not? This story is so powerful and intense! So emotional! It couldn't have been more beautiful. It was perfect! Agonizingly perfect! The scene with Severus pushing Harry away broke my heart. I couldn't stop crying. God, I was so afraid there won't be a happy ending! I was almost sure of it and it was killing me! I have never been more glad to be wrong. This wonderful, sweet and tender ending was like a balm on my broken heart, making it whole again.

It was one of the best stories I have ever read. Deep, touching and absolutely spectacular! A story one never forgets.

Thank you for writing this fic and sharing it with us. It was a pleasure and honour to read such a masterpiece. Thank you very much!

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(no subject) - [info]mia_ugly, 2009-09-21 07:53 am UTC

(Anonymous)
2009-09-21 03:28 am UTC (link)
Oh, wow. So beautiful it hurts... yes. Snape is just, just perfect. Harry is too, still a bit clueless but not willing to give up without a fight.

This was a lovely read. Thank you.

-- Armadillo

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(no subject) - [info]mia_ugly, 2009-09-21 07:49 am UTC

[info]green_grrl
2009-09-21 03:37 am UTC (link)
Fabulous! You absolutely broke my heart with Severus so beaten down by the horrible way he's been treated through life (god, Lucius was so right), and mended it with the way Harry kept smiling back in his face, unperturbed by the vitriol, then broke it again by the way Harry kept getting snatched away, hurting them both so badly. Thank Merlin Severus needed Harry so badly he overcame his dudgeon! *clings*

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(no subject) - [info]mia_ugly, 2009-09-22 05:59 am UTC

(Anonymous)
2009-09-21 04:26 am UTC (link)
Since the release of the last book I've been absent in my reading of my darling snarry fics, I check in with my favorite sites occasionally when I've lost interest in whatever fandom and am looking for the next fandom that will grab me and not let me go til I've read my way from a-z and back again. I found myself at that time just this morning and always here I am checking in with Hp - I think it'll always be that one fandom I can never say goodbye to, to many fics that glow have already been written and still so many that haven't even begun to be typed.

So it has to be fate, don't you think, that I look in and I find this story has been posted just today. It makes me smile and almost cry that this fandom can still touch me the way it does, gives me that hope that the Snarry will never die, that I'm away for months and months and come back and find a beautiful story that just feels like coming home.

I loved the story from beginning to...not end. I loved the idea of the watch as the "time traveling device", though I wounder if Albus knew that Harry would fall in love with our snarky younger Snape, who you wrote so beautiful, I could feel my heart strings tighten around my heart on the brink of pain while reading/seeing the way Severus felt about himself.

Though Ginny as a lesbian is always a laugh for me...I just somehow find that funny. I love that their marriage was a friendship, that they both love each other but at the same time dont' lie to one another...does that make sense?

I loved the funny moments you gave us...I loved the picture of Severus's Aunt and her apartment...just cracked me up thinking of both of our guys standing there waiting for Auntie's stories to go on commercial.

Though if you had let Harry hex Lucius I wouldn't have complained...why is it no matter what story I read the man in and no matter how small a part he plays he always makes me want to throw a good jelly legs and see him fall on his face...I wonder if it's because his hair is prettier than mine LOL

And now I'm rambling, but again I loved the story, thank you for writing and sharing it, it will defiantly be a story I read again at some point.

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(no subject) - [info]mia_ugly, 2009-09-22 06:02 am UTC

[info]leni_jess
2009-09-21 04:44 am UTC (link)
Oh, that's lovely. So painful to read: Severus so self-conscious, living without enough layers of skin; Harry uncertain, learning slowly to deal with rejection that is fear and not hatred, or even distaste; each loving the other, one willingly, the other thinking himself totally unwilling. All those small details of their lives, building up their characters.

Your Ginny is excellent, and oh, that Harry never understood it was Hermione she kissed. I'm glad you gave her Plum. And that the children were adpoted: such a neat resolution of the epilogue. And Hermione, gradually drawn in to Harry's recklessly insane project of changing the past, thikning up more new ways to help him do it, which never happens, and yet does: just, if only just, enough. You give Dumbledore the grace of ensuring that Severus will (probably) be able to save himself, while not interfering with whatever it is that must be.

Thanks for a wonderful story.

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(no subject) - [info]mia_ugly, 2009-09-22 06:04 am UTC

(Anonymous)
2009-09-21 04:55 am UTC (link)
I'd been waiting the entire games for your fic to post, and man-oh-man, was it worth the wait. This was an amazing piece of work *applauds* that left me smiling, crying, sitting in awe.

~Somigliana.

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(no subject) - [info]mia_ugly, 2009-09-22 06:04 am UTC

[info]joanwilder
2009-09-21 04:58 am UTC (link)
I've just reread this, and the impact was different (better but different) this time. Read it slowly, savoring your writing, sitting at the master's feet. None of that gut-wrenching anxiety like I felt the first time, wondering what you'd do (also, none of that *wtfbbq!you can't stop there send me moar nao!). The only time I cried, this time, was when McGonagall visited Snape in Mungo's, because it hit me like a tonne of bricks how much and for how long he's denied himself, for everyone's sake but his own. I believe that scene was the showcase of Severus Snape's integrity. That he stayed away (even after lying with his memories). That and how he repeatedly tried to use stunningly destructive words to make Harry go away, even though it was like a knife through his own heart.

Harry's desperation set the tone from the start. Made my heart pound and my hands sweaty. The first time Snape sees Harry as a first year, I was gutted, and that was the first time I cried, months ago. When I think of all those years in between, when Snape had been left wondering. When I think of his frenzy when Harry was late for the Welcoming Feast in sixth year… how he hated how he loved him. My god.

Your young Snape… so defensively barricaded in, so fragile and raw and needy, so sadly wise about everything (except himself). How the hope built within me over Harry's 'visits', sure that he'd find a way to tell Snape, he had to, he just had to, and then you crushed me, when I realized that the last time was 'wasted' on Dumbledore, seemingly. I was devastated; I couldn't believe…but then I realized you had miles to go before they slept….

So, I'll say it here outright; I loved the sex scenes--real knee-knocking, awkward, messy and clumsy and yeah, I felt it, you know, in my own cougghsecretcougghh places. Snape's reactions to it were so endearingly, eye-stingingly pathetic.

He closes his eyes (he was kissed, was kissed) and when he opens them, it is a new world, a world that knows the exact shape and pressure of Harry Evans' mouth.

I really liked that line; and this one:

He thinks he may combust, light fire to the bed sheets with the force of sheer desire,

It hurt, thinking about what Snape's head and heart must've done with Harry's sudden disappearances, especially the longing he must've felt after the latter ones; it hurt almost as much to watch/feel Harry's agony over what to do, how to get back, struggle through his life with that obsession a constant static in his mind, always there, always agitating…and to finally have to live with the idea that he'd failed.

How you wrapped it up, the reason why Snape returned, and went away, and finally returned for good—thanks so much for doing that. When I read this the first time, I wasn't sure what you would do, but had decided that whatever it turned out to be, would be right. But I was relieved we were in agreement. :)

Your final scene, well, it's one of a kind—how should this story end, and I've still got this damn lump in my throat: Love leaves a mark. Indeed.

The other night I was watching 'The Green Mile' on TV, and I remembered how I first read that book when it was released over a period of six months as a serial novel. How the month would drag, waiting for the next installment, and I said to myself, "Sort of how I felt, waiting for Mia's next chapter to come." Honestly, I love Snarry fiercely, but you gave me back something I'd not felt in a long while: the wonder of it, the raw visceral investment in these two finding peace and, if at all possible, finding it together. And yet you did more: you gave them love. It's a beautiful, masterfully written story, Mia, and although I love your other stories, this is now my favorite. Well done, for yourself first, and for your Team!

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(no subject) - [info]mia_ugly, 2009-09-22 06:08 am UTC
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[info]the_kinky_pet
2009-09-21 05:31 am UTC (link)

Beautiful writing, beautiful story. I cried several times.

Flawless.

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(no subject) - [info]mia_ugly, 2009-09-22 06:08 am UTC

[info]kookoolaka
2009-09-21 05:42 am UTC (link)
I'm crap at leaving feedback, but I really had to comment. This is one of the most brilliant Snarry fic's I have EVER read. Young Snape...just broke my heart. I've been misty eyed with a lump in my throat since Dumbledore's office scene. I just thought this was going to end like canon, and you went and made it work out. The thought of Snape having to watch Harry grow up is just heart wrenching.
So many brilliant parts to this story, you are a masterful writer.

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(no subject) - [info]mia_ugly, 2009-09-22 06:10 am UTC

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