Pencil?! Amazing detail, especially the rain, and the expression on their faces were so great! Told quite a story in the space of this, and Snape's remorse and his persistence to still have what he wanted were so IC. You used just enough dialogue--not overpowering, but the essential words. I love that bottom frame where they kiss the most!
Well worth the wait, Snitch! I'm glad you tackled that genre, and you nailed your prompts!