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snarrymod (snarrymod) wrote in snarry_games,
@ 2009-09-19 20:30:00

Entry tags:

art, snitch

Team Snitch Entry (ART): "A Tempest Brewing" by Lizardspots
Title: A Tempest Brewing
Artist: lizardspots
Team: Snitch
Genre(s): Mentor/Severitus (*Click for the Severitus Challenge*)
Prompt(s): Stormy Weather, The Long Goodbye
Rating/Warnings/Kinks: PG-13; Highlight if you wish to know: *AU/EWE; 7th Year Hogwarts, incestual kissing/groping!*
Artist's Notes/Disclaimers/Thank you to: My fourth time in the Games, and I was determined to keep up my running record of sequential pieces, despite travelling for 5 weeks, then coming home to a gutted out house and no privacy. In short, this comic has been the bane of my existence for the past few months!! Thank you to the Games mods for their endless patience, thank you to my fellow Snitch mates for their help with the dialogue (particularly joanwilder, naatz, and littleblackbow), and thank you to the plethora of people that I have wibbled at whist working on this piece. ♥ ♥ ♥
Media used: Pencil, embellished in Open Canvas.
Archiving/Usage permission, including the Tribute Video (only after the polls have closed and medals have been awarded): Icons: go wild! Archiving: only on WTP. Other stuff: please ask first. Tribute video: of course! :)

A Tempest Brewing by Lizardspots

Don't forget to vote and review!

MOD NOTE: POLL IS NOW CLOSED. THANK YOU FOR PARTICIPATING IN THE SNARRY GAMES.

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	amand_r 2009-09-20 03:38 am UTC (link)
	Guh. Your rain is especially awesome, but kissing snarry! Guh. ::is puddle:: (Reply to this)

	(Anonymous) 2009-09-20 03:45 am UTC (link)
	OH MY GOD. Normally, I run away as fast as I can from anything with a 'severitus' on it, but since it was YOU I went against my instincts and read it anyways... and I LOVED IT! Lovely art and great story! Thank you so much for it!! (Reply to this)

	sweetmelodykiss 2009-09-20 03:46 am UTC (link)
	Love the rain, and the kissing is so sensual. Very well done! (Reply to this)

	carpet_diemon 2009-09-20 03:55 am UTC (link)
	Holy moly. I love the rain, the changing perspectives. The prompts could have given you an easy out, but I love that you didn't take it, and instead brought something that was completely fantastic. (Reply to this)

	shadowess 2009-09-20 04:13 am UTC (link)
	Good Lord this is awesome! words are failing me as my pervy incest kink has just been pressed, HARD, by this. cough I love how you framed these, especially with that first kiss that breaks over the lines into the next frames. Wonderful! (Reply to this)

	synn 2009-09-20 04:34 am UTC (link)
	Ah, that's Awesome. I love the layout - the way some panels carry into others, but still fit if read as part of the ongoing sequence. I'd say I love it's simplicity, but it's not simple at all, you just made it look simple, in how smoothly it flows and how right it is. Beautiful : ) (Reply to this)

	auntmuriel 2009-09-20 04:35 am UTC (link)
	Wow. This is why I love Snarry Severitus. And it was perfect. I love your Snape - his hair and nose and cuffs. And the rain just added to the lovely angst. (Reply to this)

	accio_kilt 2009-09-20 04:59 am UTC (link)
	Wow!! This is so powerful!! I just adore your work!! (Reply to this)

	foxestacado 2009-09-20 05:09 am UTC (link)
	Wow. Wow. WOW. This is so...dramatic, on so many levels. Absolutely compelling. Especially that close-up of Harry's eyes as he looks away in the rain. And the RAIN! WOW. I absolutely adore this. (Reply to this)

	jadzialove 2009-09-20 05:21 am UTC (link)
	Gorgeous gorgeous gorgeous! OMG!! I have such a kink for pencil drawings anyway, but yours? Guh. Then on top of the beautiful artwork (rain! So awesome!), the story, which should be squicky on at least some level, is HOT HOT HOT instead. Beautiful, wonderful work. sighs and looks some more (Reply to this)

joanwilder
2009-09-20 05:22 am UTC (link)

Pencil?! Amazing detail, especially the rain, and the expression on their faces were so great! Told quite a story in the space of this, and Snape's remorse and his persistence to still have what he wanted were so IC. You used just enough dialogue--not overpowering, but the essential words. I love that bottom frame where they kiss the most!

Well worth the wait, Snitch! I'm glad you tackled that genre, and you nailed your prompts!

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	sra_danvers 2009-09-20 06:23 am UTC (link)
	ARG! So good lady!!! My heart was with Harry at first, but Snape was so intense, so certain... I love at the end, the kiss that show the inevitable; The love they shared. Thanks for that amazing Sunday breakfast! I'm gonna read it again! MARTA (Reply to this)

	faynia 2009-09-20 06:29 am UTC (link)
	AHHHH!!! It was the rain, wasn't it? xDDDDDD I &hearts you. DAMN! You both awesomely squicked me out while making me want to run to icon sad, staring Harry. WEIRD AND AWESOME! (Reply to this)

	veridari 2009-09-20 06:50 am UTC (link)
	iz in awe of your incredibly mad pencil skills The rain! OMG..the rain. I feel damp just looking at it (no, that kind of damp!) That kiss is hot though! Man, if this was the bane of your existence that's saying alot because it is so beautifully rendered. Great job, fellow Snitch! (Reply to this)

	ariadneelda 2009-09-20 07:23 am UTC (link)
	Wow!!! This is completely awesome! Gorgeous+wrong/hot=perfect. :D And the rain! OMG THE RAIN. It makes everything even hotter! That last kiss especially. GUH. LOVE this. So. Freaking. Much. OMG. I think it's my favourite of all your Games pieces. :D (Reply to this)

	eriador117 2009-09-20 07:34 am UTC (link)
	Wow! That was so intense, the angst, the rain and OMG that kiss! Wonderful, just wonderful :) (Reply to this)

	nenyaentwhistle 2009-09-20 08:13 am UTC (link)
	love it! love the drawing, the dialogue, the anguish conveyed in so few words and the story that's told in so few panels and yet so much to think on! great piece missy! (Reply to this)

	necromanticnoir 2009-09-20 08:46 am UTC (link)
	Phoar, that rain should be turning to steam! Hot and full of torment, gorgeous!! (Reply to this)

	gingertart50 2009-09-20 09:01 am UTC (link)
	Oh boy, this is so good! The rain, the angst and the heart-rending longing - lovely! The rain ties it all together somehow, makes it even more intense than it would have been otherwise. (Reply to this)

	fanficforensics 2009-09-20 09:14 am UTC (link)
	Amazing. The faces and the shading are incredibly well-done, and the angst and that kiss, that kiss... Guh. I need me more Severitus Snarry right now. (Reply to this)

	_algernon 2009-09-20 10:06 am UTC (link)
	Now that is just amazing. Fantastic work. Perfect! (Reply to this)

	meri_oddities 2009-09-20 10:09 am UTC (link)
	Oh, lovely. I love the way the rain is coming down for the whole thing. And it give it a damp, so of chilling feel. Well done. (Reply to this)

	katiebell_0408 2009-09-20 11:26 am UTC (link)
	OMG!! This is incredible. I love how clearly their emotions are expressed. And the kiss at the end is so...melts (Reply to this)

morgana_white
2009-09-20 11:48 am UTC (link)

Oh God, oh God, oh God! This is so powerful, so intense! And so beautiful! Their faces, the anguish, absolutely everything is sooo detailed, so PERFECT! And their eyes are so expressive! The way you divided the panels - the one with Severus's outstretched hand and and the other in which Severus kisses Harry telling him he didn't want to lose him is BRILLIANT! And the rain, OMG! This is a true MASTERPIECE! I love this and I love you for sharing this heavenly art with us! You are the best! Thank you!

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	effie_chan 2009-09-20 11:54 am UTC (link)
	You drew Snarry Severitus. I will now love you forever. (Reply to this)

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