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snarrymod (snarrymod) wrote in snarry_games,
@ 2009-08-16 10:35:00

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Team Cauldron Entry (FIC): "In Theory" By DementorDelta and CruiseDirector
Title: In Theory
Authors: dementordelta and cruisedirector
Team: Cauldron
Genre(s): Alive and Kicking (EWE)
Prompt(s): Last Chance, Code of Honour
Rating/Warnings/Kinks: Adult; Highlight if you wish to know: *Sex, profanity, Legilimency, first time.*
Word Count: ~50,000
Beta: The wonderful celandineb.
Disclaimer: All characters and U.K. settings belong to J.K. Rowling. We take no responsibility if Adelaide's Thorngrove Manor does not in fact cater to wizards.

Summary: Lucius Malfoy appears at Harry Potter's door to tell him that Severus Snape is alive...and Malfoy will tell Harry where Snape is, too, if Harry promises a favor in return.

"In Theory"

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	centaury_squill 2009-08-16 08:11 pm UTC (link)
	I love your work, so I cheered to see this posted. And what a treat it is! Especially Harry and Severus in the hotel... happy sigh... such brilliant, er, unprecedented, love-making. :) Definitely one to read again - and again... (Reply to this) (Thread)

cruisedirector, 2009-08-17 01:29 am UTC

dementordelta, 2009-08-17 01:41 am UTC

	eeyore9990 2009-08-16 08:31 pm UTC (link)
	Nggghngngh! I loved every word of this! Wow, wow, wow. So incredibly sensuous and plotty and perfect! Thank you, lovely ladies, for your gorgeous story! (Reply to this) (Thread)

cruisedirector, 2009-08-17 01:30 am UTC

dementordelta, 2009-08-17 01:42 am UTC

	snarry_fan7 2009-08-16 08:43 pm UTC (link)
	Very grand work! I really love how you've written Severus and Harry. The plot is most excellent and the smut is perfect too. Very, very well done!!~Sophia (Reply to this) (Thread)

cruisedirector, 2009-08-17 01:30 am UTC

dementordelta, 2009-08-17 01:43 am UTC

	venturous 2009-08-16 09:23 pm UTC (link)
	oh, Happy Day!!!! a Delta/Cruise production. salivates (Reply to this) (Thread)

cruisedirector, 2009-08-17 01:31 am UTC

dementordelta, 2009-08-17 01:43 am UTC

	doriszka 2009-08-16 09:52 pm UTC (link)
	OMG! What a delicious use of legilimency! I loved everything in this story, even Kreacher. And the sex... It was amazing! Thank you (Reply to this) (Thread)

cruisedirector, 2009-08-17 01:34 am UTC

dementordelta, 2009-08-17 01:44 am UTC

	lalaith_niniel 2009-08-16 09:57 pm UTC (link)
	This was a delicious way to spend a Sunday! The story was splendid and the sex divine. I loved the connection between Harry and Severus and I was terrified of Narcissa, the Grangers lovely, and Hermione just made me grin. (Reply to this) (Thread)

cruisedirector, 2009-08-17 01:36 am UTC

dementordelta, 2009-08-17 01:45 am UTC

swtalmnd
2009-08-16 09:59 pm UTC (link)

Absolutely wonderful! A perfect way to while away a Sunday afternoon. The romance was as brilliant as I've come to expect from you two, and the sex as hot, and I loved the plot that tied it all together and provided them with a rocky road to their happily ever after.

And the creature that lived in Harry's chest, which sought normalcy, popularity, all the things Harry thought he was supposed to want, had been supplanted by the creature in Harry's pants.

Also, I love you you both for all eternity for this line. So. Much. Love.
♥

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cruisedirector, 2009-08-17 01:38 am UTC

dementordelta, 2009-08-17 01:51 am UTC

	vividzephyr 2009-08-16 10:19 pm UTC (link)
	Oh, wow. That was an amazing story. I absolutely loved the plentiful sex scenes. They were so hot! The bond was really fantastic and it brought out Harry and Severus's personalities even more. Oh! And Snape speaking parseltongue! I loved that. I loved pretty much everything about this story. Wonderful job! (Reply to this) (Thread)

dementordelta, 2009-08-17 01:52 am UTC

cruisedirector, 2009-08-18 12:30 am UTC

auntmuriel
2009-08-16 10:35 pm UTC (link)

Classic Snarry. Just beautiful writing.
Loved the plot; the Malfoys scheming and Hermoine's parents. And Regulus' wand. Even Kreacher was entertaining. Such an engaging story I couldn't stop reading.
(The title did confuse me. I loved A Pastoral Interlude and for a moment hoped this was a sequel. And the wondered how I would keep the stories straight. Thanks for the clarification.)

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dementordelta, 2009-08-17 01:55 am UTC

cruisedirector, 2009-08-17 02:41 pm UTC

	okydoky 2009-08-16 10:51 pm UTC (link)
	Wow... just. Wow. I loved this fic so so much. I loved the Malfoys, and Hermione (♥!) and the relationship between Harry and Severus was jst brilliant. Very hot as well :P Loved it!! (Reply to this) (Thread)

dementordelta, 2009-08-17 02:13 am UTC

cruisedirector, 2009-08-18 12:31 am UTC

	galad222000 2009-08-16 11:44 pm UTC (link)
	LOL, did a double take on the title: was sure I'd read it already. Glad it was just a typo and I'm not nuts - nevertheless, I adored your story last year and I adore your story this year. You are both awesome writers and together you produce magic. Loved it! (Reply to this) (Thread)

dementordelta, 2009-08-17 02:14 am UTC

cruisedirector, 2009-08-17 02:42 pm UTC

	snapechic76 2009-08-17 12:01 am UTC (link)
	Stands up and applauds like a mad woman I loved this so much! I was very excited when I saw the authors of this story. I just knew it was going to be brilliant and you didn't disappoint! I just knew Snape was too stubborn to die that easily. Thanks for fixing that troubling canon ending. (Reply to this) (Thread)

dementordelta, 2009-08-17 02:16 am UTC

cruisedirector, 2009-08-17 02:43 pm UTC

green_grrl
2009-08-17 12:16 am UTC (link)

Delightful!!! My heart leapt when Lucius said Snape was still alive, and the *sparkle* ♥ *sparkle* ♥ *sparkle* ♥ *sparkle* in my eyes started with Snape's letter of proof to Harry--so very him!--and didn't stop the whole rest of the story! Loved the mental communication in the bunker, right under Lucius's nose, and the fabulous romanticism of the hotel. You even made me feel sorry for the Malfoys. Who would have thought Lucius would be the sanest one?

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dementordelta, 2009-08-17 03:07 am UTC

cruisedirector, 2009-08-18 12:32 am UTC

lazlong
2009-08-17 12:34 am UTC (link)

Plotty Snarry with huge amounts of delicious prOn - this is one of the best stories on this fest.

Loved skeptic (yet daring) Harry who asks for proof before trusting Malfoy senior, Snape - even when not sure if his feelings are seconded, comes prepared with potion for "quieting squeaky hinges" and Hermione who turns out to be exceptionally adaptable when landscape changes:D

This was an excellent read, well worth re-read. Thank You!

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dementordelta, 2009-08-17 03:10 am UTC

cruisedirector, 2009-08-18 12:34 am UTC

	umbrus 2009-08-17 01:43 am UTC (link)
	Brilliant! I love the blood bond and Harry's and Severus' interaction. The sex was HOT! I love the images passing back and forth and Severus being so unsure of Harry's feelings. This was absolutely perfect! Go Team! (Reply to this) (Thread)

dementordelta, 2009-08-17 03:11 am UTC

cruisedirector, 2009-08-18 12:36 am UTC

	auctasinistra 2009-08-17 02:10 am UTC (link)
	A thoroughly lovely read - no surprise there! Good work, you guys. (Reply to this) (Thread)

cruisedirector, 2009-08-17 01:32 pm UTC

dementordelta, 2009-08-18 03:41 am UTC

auctasinistra, 2009-08-19 01:00 am UTC

	morganlefay1958 2009-08-17 02:15 am UTC (link)
	What an awesome story!! I love the way Sev and Harry had a past of being attracted to each other, and how they came together. A bit of snark, a bit of teasing, and the new experiences discovering each other intimately. Beautifully done!! Bravo!! (Reply to this) (Thread)

dementordelta, 2009-08-17 03:13 am UTC

cruisedirector, 2009-08-18 12:37 am UTC

	torino10154 2009-08-17 02:37 am UTC (link)
	Oh, ladies, that was mmm, mmm good! I loved Harry going to rescue Severus and sneaking him away from the Malfoys, the trip to Australia-which seemed like an excuse for them to have sex early and often but I'm not complaining!, Regulus's wand, Lucius apparently trying to help Harry and Severus, teh hawt smex, and poor Draco. cuddles him Nice job! (Reply to this) (Thread)

dementordelta, 2009-08-17 03:15 am UTC

cruisedirector, 2009-08-18 12:40 am UTC

darkrhiannon
2009-08-17 03:15 am UTC (link)

OMG, this is just so long, luscious, and beautifully characterized and plotty that it hits every one of my Snarry buttons full-on. Everything that I adore in your individual and collaborative works is represented in this marvelous piece--believably sinister Malfoys who are nonetheless logical rather than insanely EVOL caricatures; a lovely developing relationship between Harry and Severus; and a devoted friendship between Harry and his friends--just made of WIN! Yum and thank you so very much!

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dementordelta, 2009-08-17 03:44 am UTC

cruisedirector, 2009-08-18 12:42 am UTC

	leela_cat 2009-08-17 03:40 am UTC (link)
	I just finished reading this story and I have an almost irresistible urge to print it out and read it again. Slowly. Savouring every word. I loved the Malfoys and their utter weird craziness. And your Severus and Harry are just the way I love them. Snarky and equals. I totally don't want to go on and on, but... the blood bond and the hot hot hot sex. Guh. (Reply to this) (Thread)

dementordelta, 2009-08-17 03:46 am UTC

cruisedirector, 2009-08-18 12:46 am UTC

ivylady
2009-08-17 03:49 am UTC (link)

Oh, I loved this story. When I saw it was you two, I knew it was going to be long, plotty, and sexy. I wasn't disappointed. I loved Lucius having to come to Harry to ask for help with Draco. I never would have thought of using Narcissa as the foil, but I think that makes sense. Her devotion to her son is ensconced in canon, so her craziness regarding Draco was perfectly in character.

As much as I enjoyed the Malfoys, I liked Harry and Severus more. I loved the blood bond between them, and the way they fell into a relationship. The sex was amazingly hot. Such a wonderful story--I wish I could vote. Fabulous job!

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cruisedirector, 2009-08-17 01:35 pm UTC

dementordelta, 2009-08-18 03:42 am UTC

	ex_lilyseyes671 2009-08-17 03:49 am UTC (link)
	sigh a lovely, lovely story! I am particularly partial to blood bonds and blood magic and love what you did with it here! The whole story rocks and is so seamless! The naughty bits were hot, but you two write the absolute best blow jobs! (Reply to this) (Thread)

cruisedirector, 2009-08-17 02:17 pm UTC

dementordelta, 2009-08-18 03:46 am UTC

	synn 2009-08-17 04:49 am UTC (link)
	Ah, what a sweet snarry! (and so very hot : ) (Reply to this) (Thread)

cruisedirector, 2009-08-17 02:17 pm UTC

dementordelta, 2009-08-18 03:48 am UTC

	isidore13 2009-08-17 05:07 am UTC (link)
	Delta, this was lovely and so canonish! :D Perfect. (Reply to this) (Thread)

dementordelta, 2009-08-22 03:30 am UTC

	red_day_dawning 2009-08-17 05:28 am UTC (link)
	I was so excited to see this that I dropped everything else to read it. It was great fun, and gloriously sexy. A wonderful story. (Reply to this) (Thread)

cruisedirector, 2009-08-17 02:18 pm UTC

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