Thought I'd commented on this and realized I had not.
The phrase "well of loneliness" wove throughout this fic. Harry's self destructive journey was especially heart breaking. I don't think I have ever disliked Albus more - his meddling cost Harry more than just a happy childhood - it nearly destroyed him.
I liked the profession you chose for Severus - I have listened to enough book on tapes to understand the incredible difficulty the voice actor performs - the wrong voice can easily ruin the listening experience.
Severus' interaction with his cat were priceless; there is no doubt who rules that household.