I get to be the first commentor (if I hurry)!!! (I read it already!)
(I did notice the mods posted the Captain of each team's stories on the same day.) ;)
And this is one of those stories that I will definitely reread a multitude of times. Let me confess, I have done it already. I get antsy over crossovers, particularly when I'm not at all familiar with the new characters. Clearly, my fears where unfounded. You wrote them so well I didn't need to be.
But it was Snape's lesson to Harry that got under my skin and stayed that way long, long after I read it. I weeped. God, how I loved to be moved in a scene to that level, but to have a sex scene be that touching (lets not forget to mention sizzling as well) and that deeply emotional...wow. You took lovemaking to a level that I have truly rarely read before. Who could blame Harry for crying afterward? I cried right along with him. There will be lots of people who post far better comments than I. I wish I could find the words to explain how that scene touched me.
I loved how they both got what they both so desperately needed AND wanted at the end. It was beautifully written. Heck...this is YOU. That's hardly a surprise to anybody. ;)