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snarrymod ([info]snarrymod) wrote in [info]snarry_games,
@ 2008-11-07 07:43:00

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Entry tags:entry, pg13, team phoenix

TEAM PHOENIX ENTRY: "If, For Moment" By Chupachup
Title: If, For a Moment
Artist: chupachup
Team: Team Phoenix
Email: chupako AT gmail
Genre(s): Postwar
Prompt(s): Worst Memory, Waking Dream
Rating/Warnings/Kinks: PG13; None
Artist's Notes/Thank you's: I really need to thank the wonderful, patient, amazing mod(s) incredibly much for putting up with my literal last-minute shenanigans. Thank you so much! Gods among men, ye be. And also a thanks to whomever the pinch-hitter was from the other team that made my submitting this possible :D
Random artist notes, haha! Firstly, my beta told me whoever reads this needs to put on some sad jams first. Secondly, I was kinda hoping for artistic ambiguity, but if it happens to be incompetent coherence, please forgive me! I really do hope it makes some kind of sense and that you enjoy it. More apologies if the talking balloons are confusing at the beginning :(
And random trivia, but I couldn't smoothly fit this into the narrative; the flowers are supposed to be forget-me-nots :D
Media used: Pencil, Corel Painter X
Archiving/Usage permission, including the Tribute Video (only after the polls have closed and medals have been awarded): yes!


Dial up users BEWARE of multiple panels under cut.












If, For a Moment, by Chupachup























































































MOD NOTE: POLL IS NOW CLOSED. THANK YOU FOR PARTICIPATING IN THE SNARRY GAMES.

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[info]redpiratemel
2008-11-07 10:41 pm UTC (link)
I am honestly crying... you are the Master of Snarry.
Maybe I'll comment more when I pick my jaw up off the floor.

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[info]jin_fenghuang
2008-11-07 11:27 pm UTC (link)
*is crying*

What a great and sad story. He better be happy in his dreams ;-P

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[info]calico_sky
2008-11-08 01:19 am UTC (link)
This is beautiful and haunting. You have torn my heart asunder and I thank you for it!

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[info]ariadneelda
2008-11-08 04:32 am UTC (link)
Wow, a whole long story! This was sad and moving and just beautiful. Wonderful!

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[info]dracofiend
2008-11-08 05:57 am UTC (link)
Wow, I was not expecting that turn of events! Beautiful renderings of Harry and Snape--I especially love Harry's wide-eyedness. ♥

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[info]blackcoyote
2008-11-08 07:40 am UTC (link)
I can't really add much to what the others have said, this is a very subtle & profound piece and I don't think you could have executed it any better. I love the little touches (the pills turning to flowers between realities & Harry having/not having his glasses likewise), all I can say is that I'm very glad that your on my team! :)

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[info]torino10154
2008-11-08 10:54 am UTC (link)
Wow. Incredible story you've told. Fantastic twist in the middle. I love how young Harry looks in his 'dreams' very much contrasted with how he looks in the hospital bed. There really aren't sufficient words-just brilliant.

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[info]zephre
2008-11-08 11:48 am UTC (link)
ah, wonderful, twisty, achy story here. beautifully drawn.

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[info]dacro
2008-11-08 12:44 pm UTC (link)
So heartbreaking, but wonderful work.

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[info]zephyr_macabee
2008-11-08 01:01 pm UTC (link)
Wow, your Harry is seriously f**ked up. I am assuming from the quote that he succeeded in committing suicide at the end, going past dreaming to the final sleep. This is a fascinating piece of work.

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[info]chrysos
2008-11-08 01:02 pm UTC (link)
Great style! The story was sad, but touching. And very well drawn. Thank you for making this.

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[info]selychan
2008-11-08 01:09 pm UTC (link)
I can't find the words to describe how much I loved this. Amazing.

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[info]allzugern
2008-11-08 04:54 pm UTC (link)
I really loved this. Intense and sad. Very well done.

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[info]elsacartwright
2008-11-08 07:48 pm UTC (link)
You made me cry. So good -- and I like the story's ambiguity, it works well. Also love the "snow and trees all around" panel from the beginning. Really beautiful.

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(no subject) - [info]chupachup, 2008-11-12 02:53 am UTC

[info]kitsune17
2008-11-08 11:11 pm UTC (link)
This was amazing. I nearly cried.

Well done.

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[info]odogoddess
2008-11-09 01:06 am UTC (link)
Beautiful, heart-breakingly, achingly sweet and so utterly shattering. You win.

clapping

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[info]snapesnapesnape
2008-11-09 02:26 am UTC (link)
That was absolutely incredible. It gave me hope, then broke my heart, then gave me hope, then broke my heart again. I kept thinking that if I read it twice (or three times) that I would come up with something more to say, other than a simplistic "I loved this".
I love fanfic and fanart, but rarely have I seen so much depth covered by an art paneling. It was plotty without saying a lot, since the actions and little notes (such as "pass", text size, or the location of speaking bubbles) put a lot more realism into such a scene than a thousand words of fanfic might not have captured.

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[info]nahimana
2008-11-09 03:04 am UTC (link)
That is AMAZING. The storyline is so beautiful and so tragic! I am stunned by how beautiful this is.

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[info]treewishes
2008-11-09 03:48 am UTC (link)
This SO worked for me. Lovely and haunting.

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[info]fbowden
2008-11-09 06:13 am UTC (link)
Wow, I'm stunned. This is sheer genius, amazing art and story and a totally IC Snape voice, perfect! So sad, but not; fantastic!

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[info]themostepotente
2008-11-09 12:50 pm UTC (link)
Very impressive. Being a huge anime fan, I adored the styling of this.

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[info]tgin
2008-11-09 01:05 pm UTC (link)
This is absolutely incredible. Very haunting. Amazing work!

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[info]froggie
2008-11-09 02:19 pm UTC (link)
This is brilliantly done. Your sense of storytelling feels very right in manga format, the art is consistent and works perfectly in the format, and your dialogue is very good as well. Also, I'm a sucker for Camus.

Wonderful stuff! I was really blown away by this entry.

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[info]lampblack
2008-11-09 09:52 pm UTC (link)
Brilliant.

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[info]cruisedirector
2008-11-09 10:15 pm UTC (link)
So sad and creepy and evocative! Really well done!

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