SKFJHSDFKJHDSFJFHEHEIDJHFDKSJFHDJKGHSFDKJGHEFAEHFJKDS GOOD GOD. THAT WAS. IT WAS LIKE WATCHING A MOVIE. HOMG WHERE ON EARTH DO I BEGIN. POINT FORM --
1) Harry's expression - that prowly, lion-like LOOK on his face, right from the start. 2) Such a contrast to Snape who can't even make eye contact, who looks almost...vulnerable? I never thought that'd work, but it DOES. 3) THE PULL. OMG I looooove how you paneled it, in such short little close-up shots of immediacy and intensity, only to transition into that long shot of them finally kissing. Holy take my breath away. 4) THE KISS. HARRY'S LEG UP ON DESK. ARRR AR AR ARRRRKFHKDJFSKJFHDSKJF 5) I love the transition of expression as Snape gives in, like. You can see his thoughts working through his mind, you can see his processes. It's fantastic. 6) NAWWW THE END PIC IS SO ROMANTIC. I love how Harry just has fully leapt onto Snape, AHAHAH. DORK.