I've been waiting for your entry because I love how your mind works.
Woah, no punches pulled here. Sort of O. Henry-esque, the 'return to me' making Snape the 'sole survivor'. I like how Snape's only semi-materialized, and your use of perspective allowed the reader to get the full effect of Snape's horrified expression, and what Harry'd done. Makes me wonder about the back story....