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snarrymod ([info]snarrymod) wrote in [info]snarry_games,
@ 2008-06-01 20:40:00

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Entry tags:entry, igtow, team dragon

TEAM DRAGON ENTRY: I Got Tired of Waiting "Norbert et Chloë"
Title: Norbert et Chloë
Author: I Got Tired of Waiting [info]igtow
Team: Dragon, baby!
Genre: Romance
Prompts: Separation Anxiety and Possessiveness
Rating/Warnings: 18+ :: *Mild Het, Minor OC Character Death, 98% DH and Epilogue compliant.*
Word Count: ~77,000
Summary: Norbert and Chloë are destined to be life-mates, or at least they will be, if they can just find each other. However, to gain true contentment, they have to help their respective humans find their own happiness--hopefully together. An eggsemplum on the meaning of heart's ease and the capricious nature of second chances.
A/N: My undying gratitude to [info]amand_r, [info]aseneth, and [info]jadzialove for the kick-ass beta, as well as [info]klynie1, [info]centaury_squill, and [info]mimiheart for the last read-through corrections. Awl udder mis-steaks mussed bee mind.
Dedicated to: RaeWhit aka as [info]joanwilder, a most wonderous team capitan and this dragon's 'keeper'. ♥
To my fellow Dragons: Rooooaaaarrrrr! Now, let us partake of our competitions' giblets stories in a rum sauce spirit of fowl fair play!
To the mods: I'd like to extend my thanks for placing me on the best team ever! It's been a hoot roooaaarrr!!

Disclaimer: Nope, still not mine except for a few new characters (and Rae's mine; you can't have her, damn it!.







Norbert and Chloë perchin' in a tree,
H-I-S-S-I-N-G
First comes love, then comes mating,
Then comes hatchlings in the fire's grating.



"Norbert and Chloë by I Got Tired of Waiting"





Chaptered Version provided by IGTOW:
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"Norbert and Chloë by I Got Tired of Waiting"





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Mod note: Due to the length of this story, we will not be posting another until tomorrow Evening. Thank you.


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[info]ex_lilyseyes671
2008-06-02 04:32 am UTC (link)
This story is one of those stories that you start to read and you just can't put it down until you are finished! Your Snape is spot-on and I love how Harry has matured into a truly admirable man! And the drakes are the pudding - a tasty morsel that adds a wonderful dimention to the whole amazing story.

You are a brilliant storyteller and I feel very priviledged to be on the same team!

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(no subject) - [info]igtow, 2008-06-02 06:58 am UTC

[info]mimiheart
2008-06-02 05:45 am UTC (link)
I have been waiting and waiting for this to post. I loved it the first time I read it. I'm going to read it again after I'm done reading all the ones I HAVEN'T read yet.

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(no subject) - [info]igtow, 2008-06-02 07:04 am UTC

[info]joanwilder
2008-06-02 06:26 am UTC (link)
I'll be rereading this too. I did click through the chapters of your second version, and it's beautiful. So excited to see this up!

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(no subject) - [info]igtow, 2008-06-02 07:34 am UTC
(no subject) - [info]joanwilder, 2008-06-04 03:51 am UTC
(no subject) - [info]igtow, 2008-06-04 10:36 pm UTC
(no subject) - [info]joanwilder, 2008-06-06 04:18 am UTC
(no subject) - [info]igtow, 2008-06-06 09:56 am UTC

[info]simons_flower
2008-06-02 07:48 am UTC (link)
Just wow! Originally, I rolled my eyes because I'd just gotten caught up then this 77K word fic was posted. That said, it has to be the quickest read for its length that I've ever read. Er, that sounded complicated.

I loved how you unrolled the years between Harry and Snape, as well as the relationship between Norbert and Chloe.

Amazing and eggscelent fic! *recs*

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(no subject) - [info]igtow, 2008-06-02 05:36 pm UTC

[info]aliciajd
2008-06-02 08:45 am UTC (link)
It's 3:30 am. Five hours after I just "glanced' at the opening few paragraphs. I intended to save it to my hard drive and read it tomorrow (which is now, of course, today) There was no possible way to put it down, I was well and thoroughly hooked for the duration.

I loved this, absolutely canon compliant, but so original. I want a firedrake egg so badly. It even made me forget that it's been 22 months and 6 days since you posted Book Four of a A Two-Edged Sword. But, who keeps track of those things anyway, when presented with such a marvelous tale as Norbert et Chloë? This was perfect!!!

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(no subject) - [info]igtow, 2008-06-02 05:42 pm UTC
(no subject) - [info]aliciajd, 2008-06-02 11:38 pm UTC
(no subject) - [info]igtow, 2008-06-03 12:06 am UTC

[info]ivylady
2008-06-02 10:31 am UTC (link)
I've been waiting to read this one again. I loved it when you posted it to the comm, and I'm sure I'll love it even more now. I just don't have the time until this evening.

Go Dragons!

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(no subject) - [info]igtow, 2008-06-02 05:44 pm UTC

[info]florida_minxie
2008-06-02 10:57 am UTC (link)
*prints out*

Be back this evening!

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(no subject) - [info]igtow, 2008-06-02 05:45 pm UTC
(no subject) - [info]florida_minxie, 2008-06-03 02:37 pm UTC
(no subject) - [info]igtow, 2008-06-03 05:44 pm UTC

[info]themostepotente
2008-06-02 12:25 pm UTC (link)
Will DEFINITELY be back to read this!

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(no subject) - [info]igtow, 2008-06-02 05:45 pm UTC

[info]red_day_dawning
2008-06-02 12:36 pm UTC (link)
What a delight to read! Lovely and slow-moving, this story completely absorbed me. I loved the fire-drakes & the way they connected with their carers - and I especially enjoyed their wonderful mating flight. A beautiful fic.

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(no subject) - [info]igtow, 2008-06-02 05:49 pm UTC

[info]babblingbrook42
2008-06-02 02:36 pm UTC (link)
I loved this fic when you posted it on the comm. It is well developed and has many twists and turns that keep you reading. Once I get caught up on the game stories, I know I will come back and read it again and probably again and again in the years to come.

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(no subject) - [info]igtow, 2008-06-02 06:14 pm UTC

[info]amand_r
2008-06-02 03:25 pm UTC (link)
Dude, this fic ruled. Norbert and Chloë FTW!

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(no subject) - [info]igtow, 2008-06-02 06:17 pm UTC

[info]torino10154
2008-06-02 04:58 pm UTC (link)
Practically perfect in every way. What can I say-Norbert and Chloe were the best original characters ever, Harry's break up with Ginny was organic I think rather than forced, Silas Marner and Dorian Grey!, I cried when dear George died, I can't believe Norbert ate Rita! (or tired to anyway)-couldn't happen to a nicer person. I suspected Snape being so rude to Lucius might have been a mistake. Loved that Harry only wanted a kiss. But really, when Severus told Harry he loved him but that he might never be in love with him-oh god that was the most beautiful scene I think I've read in a long time and you could have easily ended it there, not that I wanted you to!! I liked the way some was first person. And finally it took me until chapter 7 (as I read the chaptered version) to be convinced that the names you used were your teammates. Incredible story. Instant classic. Well done.

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(no subject) - [info]igtow, 2008-06-02 06:27 pm UTC
(no subject) - [info]torino10154, 2008-06-02 06:37 pm UTC
(no subject) - [info]igtow, 2008-06-02 06:47 pm UTC

[info]zephre
2008-06-02 08:31 pm UTC (link)
I'm not sure I can adequately express how incredibly marvelous this fic was. The complexity of the plot, the way the characters are so brilliantly developed, the sheer emotional weight of it... I was just riveted.
You have managed to create a valid and rock-solid AU that I completely believed, and invested in, beyond the canon we are given.
Extraordinary.

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(no subject) - [info]igtow, 2008-06-02 08:42 pm UTC

[info]meri_oddities
2008-06-02 08:50 pm UTC (link)
I think I told you that I enjoyed reading this the first time, and I'm totally looking forward to reading it again over the next several days. Yum.

I adored Chloe and Norbert. You gave them such wonderful personality! And Harry and Snape, too. This was just a long lovely read. One that I think is going to hold up for many more readings. *g*

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(no subject) - [info]igtow, 2008-06-02 08:58 pm UTC

[info]snarry_fan7
2008-06-02 11:44 pm UTC (link)
I love Norbert and Chloe, so adorable and awesome. Yay for Norbert eating Skeeter, lol! I really like how you titled each chapter. A very wonderful story. Marvelous work!~Sophia

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(no subject) - [info]igtow, 2008-06-02 11:56 pm UTC
(no subject) - [info]igtow, 2008-06-03 12:59 am UTC
(no subject) - [info]snarry_fan7, 2008-06-03 03:21 am UTC
(no subject) - [info]igtow, 2008-06-03 04:46 am UTC

[info]klynie1
2008-06-02 11:46 pm UTC (link)
I don't know how in the world you waited so patiently for this to post. I've been impatiently looking forward to reading it again; I plan to print it off and curl up with so that I can savor it. Such a lovely story!

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(no subject) - [info]igtow, 2008-06-03 12:02 am UTC

[info]plantinshadows
2008-06-03 12:38 am UTC (link)
oh what a lovely fic! I simply loved the little firedrakes! ginny is a menace as she seems to be in most snarry fics, she doesn't deserve poor neville and the poor firedrake.
I would have liked to know what became of lucius malfoy.. was he ever punished..probably not. but if he's still at malfoy manor, I'm surprised harry allowed al to visit scorpius there.
I liked the slowness of severus and harry's romantic relationship, it makes it so much more ..ah.. wonderful and romantic and sensitive!

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(no subject) - [info]igtow, 2008-06-03 12:55 am UTC
(no subject) - [info]plantinshadows, 2008-06-03 10:24 am UTC
(no subject) - [info]igtow, 2008-06-03 06:02 pm UTC

[info]chazpure
2008-06-03 01:49 am UTC (link)
Oh! I just...

♥♥♥♥

More later, when I have two minutes to rub together...

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(no subject) - [info]igtow, 2008-06-03 04:20 am UTC
Evil, pure evil....
[info]amenaneri
2008-06-03 03:01 am UTC (link)
...to write such a compelling story that I was a naughty girl at work and couldn't help but keep reading it off-and-on all day instead of working. And when I was actually doing the job I am being paid to do, I couldn't stop thinking about Norbert and Chloe and Harry and Severus. What an AWESOME story!!!! I knew I was saving my perfect 9 scores for something, and you are it!! Wow--so much richness and tenderness and forgiveness and fun and hesitancy and slowly unfolding wonderful love and romance. Totally satisfying, totally fabulous.

I, too, want a firedrake--made me think of fire-lizards from Anne McCaffrey, one of which I've wanted since I was 10. That's 30 years of longing, and your story made them so real and wonderful for me again (and made me so jealous of Harry and Severus). Also, my birthday is tomorrow, so I'm just going to consider your fabulous story a slightly early birthday present.

I've got to say, I can understand Ginny being jealous of Norbert--it would be hard to compete with someone that cute, loving and bonded. But she was an idiot to shuffle off all of Harry's love and affection (as well as the kids) in favor of her status and career, which was the real problem, cute firedrakes aside. I like that you didn't make it about Norbert, really. In post epilogue fics, I like it when the cracks in their teenage-romance-turned-into-marriage widen so far that they don't belong together anymore. Makes it bigger and more interesting than just adding Snape back into the picture.

And what a wonderful Severus yours is. Finally successful in the way he deserved, yet still haunted by the past behind his new nose, scars, manners and fancy robes. That he feels so undeserving is so heartbreaking, yet wonderful.

Anyway, now I REALLY have to finish work! Thank you for a marvelous read. I love all of your stories, but this may be my favorite.

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Re: Evil, pure evil.... - [info]igtow, 2008-06-03 04:40 am UTC

[info]hambares
2008-06-03 03:53 am UTC (link)
First thing first - I had to slow my reading down so I wouldn't miss anything, but damn, I wanted to race ahead to see what "Egg..." title was at the beginning of each part. I loved those!!

Your story had everything I love: hurt/comfort/angst, humor, a Ginny I could hate, and a happy end. I'm off to dream happily!

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(no subject) - [info]igtow, 2008-06-03 04:44 am UTC

[info]mac_tunes
2008-06-03 05:59 am UTC (link)
Got turned into a blubbering idiot...

This is a very fantastic story! Took me so long to finish reading. I wanted to read and yet and wanted to read fast. Can't decide which one. Anyway, this is so good! I can see a few of your team dragon mates also playing a part in this story. Did they bribe you to be in the story? Aw~

The Firedrakes are very good addition/enhancement to Harry's and Severus's lives. So intertwined and so bonded! No wonder Ginny can't stand Harry's attached to dear Norbert. Aw~

Darn it! You wrote all the emotions in your prompt and more! Love it that people can and will stand for Severus. I wished that the story will go on and on... :( why did I finish it so fast? Half a night were straining my eyes reading this (had to downloaded into phone 'coz computer went boomed! *sobs*). There's so much more I want to see, but seeing that my time on borrowed computer is about to end, I would just say "Thank you very much for taking me on this wonderful adventure!"

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(no subject) - [info]igtow, 2008-06-03 06:18 am UTC
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(no subject) - [info]igtow, 2008-06-03 06:06 pm UTC

[info]galad222000
2008-06-03 06:23 am UTC (link)
You are, dear lady,as always, sheer perfection! I love every aspect of this incredible fic from the wonderful characterizations of SS and HP and their relationship to the adorable firedrakes! Genius!! CB

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(no subject) - [info]igtow, 2008-06-03 06:34 am UTC
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(no subject) - [info]igtow, 2008-06-03 09:03 pm UTC

[info]telwyrd
2008-06-03 07:05 am UTC (link)
What a bonanza! What a feast! What a masterpiece! Long, plotty, humorous, enthralling, angsty, romantic, Norbert et Chloe was full to bursting with Snape and Harry goodness. This story was ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥.

The dialogue was marvelous. I love all the rich details and intricate scenes.

Highly imaginative! A story to savor slowly.

I need to re-read it again and will be back to comment properly when I'm done. I just wanted to let you know that this is an outstanding story. You are a brilliant wordsmith!

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(no subject) - [info]igtow, 2008-06-03 07:15 am UTC
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[info]booffra
2008-06-03 08:58 am UTC (link)
Wow, just wow. I am going to be sooooo sleepy at work tomorrow, but I just couldn't stop reading. Booffra

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(no subject) - [info]igtow, 2008-06-03 09:07 am UTC

[info]centaury_squill
2008-06-03 09:32 am UTC (link)
I loved this when you linked it to the comm: couldn't wait for each new installment, and now here it is in its final perfection - one to read again and again.

The firedrakes are awesome and the effect they have on their owners - just, guh! And what a fitting end for the loathsome Rita Skeeter :D

I'm still chuckling over the way you fitted all our names, in, too. Especially mine *G*, Centaury Potions, hee.

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(no subject) - [info]igtow, 2008-06-03 06:11 pm UTC

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