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snarrymod ([info]snarrymod) wrote in [info]snarry_games,
@ 2008-05-29 07:57:00

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Entry tags:entry, odogoddess, team phoenix

TEAM PHOENIX ENTRY: Odogoddess "All Butterbeer & Gobstones"
Title: All Butterbeer & Gobstones
Author: [info]psyfic
Team: Phoenix
Genre(s): Alternate Universe *Hover/Click for Games Definition of Alternate Universe*
Prompt(s): Ménage à Trois, Ashes of Youth
Rating/Warnings/Kinks: NC-17 **Het content, voyeurism, threesome (m/f/m), rimming, gender-buggery, H/C.*
Word Count: ~ 17,500
Summary: What is a bored, naked spirit to do? Aside from that...
A/N: I rather fancy the title is the wizarding equivalent of the Muggle term "All Beer and Skittles." I nearly titled it "The Sixth Realization" for reasons that shall become obvious.
Many apologies: to all the other [info]snarry_games writers whose work I was unable to read and/or view whilst I toiled over this fic. I shall have to catch up with all your lovely sounding work. Please know your efforts will be a welcome distraction from the summer blues.

MOD NOTE: Thank you, Odogoddess!





"All Butterbeer & Gobstones by Odogoddess"



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[info]alisanne
2008-05-29 04:48 pm UTC (link)
*HAPPY SIGH*
What a glorious fic! I adored it with all my fluffy heart. :)
First, I love how you placed them all on a level playing field in terms of age and experience and, well, outlook. :)
I adore the language of flowers, so you hooked me immediately with that. Also? I was floored by the meaning of Snape's first question to Harry all those years ago. I think my heart was in my mouth for that whole segment. Just lovely.
I loved the gentle ebb and flow of this piece with all of them finding their way in the world together.
And Eileen Snape! Oh but she was hilarious (and what an accent!).
Oh, and I can't forget the sizzing sex. ;)
Great job. What a lovely read! Thanks so much for this and for being on our team.

Yay Team Phoenix!

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(no subject) - [info]psyfic, 2008-05-31 09:32 pm UTC

[info]alienor77310
2008-05-29 05:37 pm UTC (link)
Thankyouthankyouthankyou! A few hours ago, I was bemoaning the lack of snermionnary, and now this? It's beautiful, it's moving, and it's a pleasure to read.

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(no subject) - [info]psyfic, 2008-05-31 09:34 pm UTC

[info]shiv5468
2008-05-29 06:47 pm UTC (link)
Oh very nice. Very nice indeed.

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(no subject) - [info]psyfic, 2008-05-31 09:34 pm UTC

[info]snarry_fan7
2008-05-29 06:55 pm UTC (link)
I really like how well the three of them interact throughout the story and I love the different meanings of the flowers and how Severus leaves them for Harry and Hermione. Wonderful work (hot too!).~Sophia

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(no subject) - [info]psyfic, 2008-05-31 09:35 pm UTC

[info]igtow
2008-05-29 06:59 pm UTC (link)
Eh, I knew from the title on that I would like this story and with you satisfying two of my favourite pairings at the same time, how could I not? Lovely, just lovely.

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(no subject) - [info]psyfic, 2008-05-31 09:35 pm UTC

[info]torino10154
2008-05-29 07:05 pm UTC (link)
What a sweet tale. I have to say my favorite thread of the story was all the flowers and their symbolism-whether the ones Severus left for Hermione and Harry or the ones they left in his bed to reveal their intentions. I liked the way Severus's not quite ghostly state was explained and finally his return to the land of the living, with much help from H&H. Oh! And Eileen-she was bloody brilliant! Great job.

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(no subject) - [info]psyfic, 2008-05-31 09:36 pm UTC

[info]plantinshadows
2008-05-29 09:00 pm UTC (link)
omg, a threesome with three virgins, that's a first! hermione with a make-do penis.. wow.. intriguing!! I don't think I've read this threesome before, so there's another first. certainly, and for me unexpectantly, hot!
I very much liked the way all of them interacted with each other, snape's insecurity etc. snape being all romantic with his flowers is lovely and just makes me go: awww!

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(no subject) - [info]psyfic, 2008-05-31 09:41 pm UTC

[info]tsujton
2008-05-29 10:08 pm UTC (link)
"Sometimes, he knew, he still conjured things in his sleep. It happened periodically to most wizards and witches, a byproduct of dreams and magic."

What an absolutely BRILLIANT concept! I hope you will incorporate it into another story? :)

Your euphamisms and descriptions were fun, including:

"This had never happened before and he was rather mortified, especially if there was a ghost watching him, because he did not want anyone to think he was skint in the smalls, much less unable to extend his wand, even if they were dead."

"Harry lifted a brow at this, then his face got the expression she had not seen on it in many a year. It was the same expression Harry used to get when he had spotted the Snitch."

"Severus Snape discovered he could blush just as well as any maiden if the situation, or something else, arose."

And if there was an award for 'best rendering of Eileen Prince Snape' you should get it! She was hysterically funny!!!

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(no subject) - [info]psyfic, 2008-05-31 09:43 pm UTC

[info]miamadwyn
2008-05-29 11:17 pm UTC (link)
Now that was lovely. I found all the pairings you mentioned both unexpected yet fun and charming, and SS/HG/HP were a sweet delight together.

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(no subject) - [info]psyfic, 2008-05-31 09:43 pm UTC

[info]amenaneri
2008-05-30 12:26 am UTC (link)
Wow, what a unique and wonderful fic! I'd never thought of this threesome, and it was a little weird for my recently exclusively slashy mind to add Hermione in with Snarry, but I loved it. I used to love HG/SS fics, so how cool to combine them. And the engorgio idea--whew that was hot! If only...

And how sweet that they were all well-read, vividly imagined virgins--especially cute that Hermione talked Harry through his first time with Snape.

And the flower imagery was loverly. All in all, great job, and thanks for your unique ideas and fun story!

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(no subject) - [info]psyfic, 2008-05-31 09:44 pm UTC

[info]freddie_mac
2008-05-30 12:51 am UTC (link)
wow -- what a different and extremely original idea! Loved the symbolism through out, and how they got together (Eileen metaphorically smacking them upside the head!). Sequel would be nice -- maybe how the world at large reacts, or a few years hence, or (dare I say it?) being in the family way? *grin*

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(no subject) - [info]psyfic, 2008-05-31 09:45 pm UTC

[info]wonderfulwrites
2008-05-30 01:05 am UTC (link)
Yay! Another SS/HP/HG to add to my list. It's my favorite very rare threesome. Clever use of Engorgio and interesting way of resurrecting Snape. Well done!

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(no subject) - [info]psyfic, 2008-05-31 09:46 pm UTC
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[info]telwyrd
2008-05-30 05:30 am UTC (link)
Sweet, funny, romantic – it has all the things I want in a Snarry story and then some!

When it starts out with poor naked Ghost Snape (why’s the poor man naked?!) wandering around trying to figure out why he had not gone on to his blessed reward, I was feeling mystified as well and wondering how the devil you were going to get him together with Harry. The slow unfolding of the story was delightful as Snape decides that he needs to help Harry find happiness so that he can finally pass on. Snape resolves to hook Harry up with the very available Hermione so the two can live happily ever after and he can rest in peace at last.

Ah the best laid plans of mice and men! ::chuckles:: I loved how Snape uses the language of flowers as the means in which to enact a courtship between Potter and Granger. And I laughed gleefully at all the ups and downs of his plan and how eventually Harry and Hermione realized something fishy was going on.

Considering the brat had not understood nor even bothered to attempt to understand Snape's most heartfelt apology ever, which he'd presented Potter with on the very first day he had met him face to face, Severus had little hope the man Harry had grown into had rectified his ignorance.

Huh? ::confuzzled:: When did Snape apologize to Harry on that first day?

which infuriated Snape who had suffered insomnia since he was a boy.

Oh, poor Snape. :( It explains a lot.

Snape groaned as Granger ran off. That was not the reaction he had been hoping for, although, it had seemed so promising at first.

After the disaster of the day before, Severus felt stroppy. He did not follow the pair when they left. He filled each room with anemone and white carnations.
What else was there for a bored, naked spirit to do?

::hehehe:: Snape’s doing his best, but Harry and Hermione are just not cooperating!

"Accio, Resurrection Stone!"
"Ron was right, you are brilliant, but scary."

::blinks:: I agree. Excellent use of the Resurrection Stone! I enjoyed their exchanges with Dumbledore and Eileen Snape.

"It's clear to me and I'm dead as ditch water. He's probably in love with you two, innee?"

You tell ‘em, Mama Snape!

Instead, he croaked, "When did... you both... get so old?"

::bounces:: Yesyesyes! He’s back! He’s back! He’s baaaaaaaaack! And still as snarky as ever. Wheeeeeeeee!

This was the bestest thing I’ve every read:

"Oh my God!"

"What?"

"Maybe he is the same man. He's been using symbolism all along." She took Harry's hand in hers and reminded him, "What was the first question he asked you in class, in First Year?"

Harry frowned slightly. "He asked what I would get by adding asphodel to an infusion of wormwood."

"Yes."

He blinked owlishly at her, and Hermione groaned.

"Oh, Harry, I didn't know Severus was into symbolism at the time, but... Asphodel symbolically means death, Harry, especially the death of someone beloved to the person who offers asphodel. Asphodel is also a lily."

"A lily?" He sat up straighter, looking stunned. "What does wormwood mean?"

"Bitter sorrow."

Harry tightened his grip on her hand and she responded in kind as he began to tremble.
"So... Snape was asking me if I knew what death and bitter sorrow are? My mom's death added to bitter sorrow."

"Well, in essence, he was asking if you knew what death steeped in bitter sorrow is. Or put another way, he might have been trying to tell you that he had loved Lily and that he bitterly regretted her death."

"Oh, God, and I sat like a dumb lump and said I didn't know and he thought I was rejecting his apology."

"Actually, he thought you were an ignorant boy like your father had been, neglecting your studies, happy to skate by on your celebrity."

::jaw drops:: Oh. My. Goodness. This is…wow. ::bowled over:: Incredibly well thought out and utterly plausible. Brilliant! Thank you.

"Oh, but that makes sense," Harry suddenly interjected. "You were entombed, Wizard-style. They just wrap your naked body in a sheet."

Ha! So that was why poor Snape was starkers.

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Part 2 - [info]telwyrd, 2008-05-30 05:31 am UTC
Re: Part 2 - [info]psyfic, 2008-05-31 09:50 pm UTC
Re: Part 1 - [info]psyfic, 2008-05-31 09:49 pm UTC

[info]bethbethbeth
2008-05-30 04:48 pm UTC (link)
What a charming story! I love this threesome anyway, but you've done such a good job with it - and given Snape such love and comfort (and excellent sex) - that I can't help but sigh happily.

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(no subject) - [info]psyfic, 2008-05-31 09:51 pm UTC

[info]slashpine
2008-05-31 04:44 am UTC (link)
This was loads of fun! It was so funny and sweet all mixed together. The language of flowers information was fascinating and I always enjoy learning more of this! The h/c was as tenderly folded in as Snape in the guest bedroom... it was so *awwwww* how they took care of him. I fell in love with all three of them all over again right there. The sex was incredibly hot, and creative, and how funny again that they're all virgins! Heh. But with these three, the combination of determination and book-learning makes it inevitable that it would be great.

Their search for the intruder and then, for Snape himself, was terrifically well-done. I *loved* the return visit from Albus! And Eileen, so funny (Tobias a better lover after death, LOL) and skint-tongued, just as one would imagine from Snape's mother.

All in all, this was hugely enjoyable. I already know I will hug and cherish and read it many times more.

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Oh! And a sequel? - [info]slashpine, 2008-05-31 04:44 am UTC
Re: Oh! And a sequel? - [info]psyfic, 2008-05-31 09:55 pm UTC
(no subject) - [info]psyfic, 2008-05-31 09:53 pm UTC

[info]katbirder
2008-06-01 01:31 am UTC (link)
Lovely story. I love Hermione and Snape and the threesome was awesome.

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(no subject) - [info]psyfic, 2008-06-01 04:17 am UTC

[info]simons_flower
2008-06-01 08:46 am UTC (link)
Harry/Hermione, yay! I think you really made this threesome work. They didn't jump into anything, but rather had their eyes opened slowly and were open to experiencing it.

Great job!

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(no subject) - [info]psyfic, 2008-06-01 09:38 pm UTC

[info]vamp2puppy
2008-06-01 08:16 pm UTC (link)
I am completely in love with this story, I can tell I'll be reading it often. And I do hope you write a sequel.

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(no subject) - [info]psyfic, 2008-06-01 09:44 pm UTC

[info]leela_cat
2008-06-01 08:49 pm UTC (link)
I love how you turned Snape's first interaction with Harry into an apology. I have to admit that I didn't get it at first, and then I read further and -- wow did it work in a strange way that no eleven year old is going to get.

Very nicely done, especially with Snape courting them with flowers.

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(no subject) - [info]psyfic, 2008-06-01 09:50 pm UTC

[info]maddiec24
2008-06-02 03:24 am UTC (link)
I admit, I was wary at first. I've never read any Harry/Hermione. But, it was *you*, so of course I read it. And I adore this story! The flowers and their meanings, and I've always love your theory about Severus's apology. What I loved most was Severus, and him finally finding love and acceptance. I know I'll be rereading this many times. And did I hear sequel? Yes, please!

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(no subject) - [info]psyfic, 2008-06-02 04:15 am UTC

[info]keyairreem
2008-06-02 12:56 pm UTC (link)
Nicely done! Naked Sev is always welcome.

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(no subject) - [info]psyfic, 2008-06-03 09:24 pm UTC

[info]babblingbrook42
2008-06-02 02:29 pm UTC (link)
This was a cute and fun to read story. Nicely told, and I loved the flowers scattered throughout.

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(no subject) - [info]psyfic, 2008-06-03 09:24 pm UTC

[info]ziasudra
2008-06-02 08:45 pm UTC (link)
Hee, I love Snape being all mischievous with his flower-sending hints ;) That was a great theory you had there with Snape's Book 1 opening speech -- I can't believe I missed it when you first postulated it!

I also enjoyed the Harry/Hermione aspects of the fic, even though I don't recall having ever read a H/Hr fic *g* That the two of them are past the adolescent/young adult "finding myself" stage of life makes their eventual attraction to each other more realistic for me, and also more solid for a hopeful future. Throw Snape into the mix, and they're going to have quite an interesting future!

I enjoyed this a lot. Thanks for writing for Team Phoenix :D

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(no subject) - [info]psyfic, 2008-06-03 09:27 pm UTC

[info]elvirablue
2008-06-03 10:51 am UTC (link)
Lovely, flowery story. Apart from the flowers, I really liked Severus playing matchmaker and falling for both of them. The voyeurism was very enjoyable.

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(no subject) - [info]psyfic, 2008-06-03 09:28 pm UTC

[info]klynie1
2008-06-04 06:25 pm UTC (link)
What a funny, hot, sexy story! I love how you incorporated the language of flowers.

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(no subject) - [info]psyfic, 2008-06-05 03:26 pm UTC

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