An interesting, compelling story. You really captured Harry and Severus well. I'm not surprised Harry wished on the well--he has always had such a hard time containing his curiosity especially when bored. Severus was so much more dignified once he was back from death, although he was still commanding.
So nice to see James and Lily make the choice to die for their son's happiness instead of having it taken away from them. They've really grown up in your story. Well done!