This is going to be sort of a strange review... I really liked the style of your writing, I *love* long well-written fics - they`re like chocolate, imo! - and I couldn`t resist reading yours, despite the somewhat scary warnings. I especially loved the language you used to describe Harry`s work with Potions, and the descriptions themselves. Everybody was quite IC, despite the fact that the fic was alternate reality, which is not an easy thing to write. Snape was acting a bit weird but it`s not as if he was a sensible person in canon, so his obsession is completely believable. And the sexual tension was burning hot! Alas, I have a reallly biiiig squik about D/s - none for rape etc. And I wish the fic had had a warning for D/s :P