Tweak

InsaneJournal

Tweak says, "Marco? Polo! Fish out of water"

Username: 
Password:    
Remember Me
  • Create Account
  • IJ Login
  • OpenID Login
Search by : 
  • View
    • Create Account
    • IJ Login
    • OpenID Login
  • Journal
    • Post
    • Edit Entries
    • Customize Journal
    • Comment Settings
    • Recent Comments
    • Manage Tags
  • Account
    • Manage Account
    • Viewing Options
    • Manage Profile
    • Manage Notifications
    • Manage Pictures
    • Manage Schools
    • Account Status
  • Friends
    • Edit Friends
    • Edit Custom Groups
    • Friends Filter
    • Nudge Friends
    • Invite
    • Create RSS Feed
  • Asylums
    • Post
    • Asylum Invitations
    • Manage Asylums
    • Create Asylum
  • Site
    • Support
    • Upgrade Account
    • FAQs
    • Search By Location
    • Search By Interest
    • Search Randomly

snarrymod ([info]snarrymod) wrote in [info]snarry_games,
@ 2008-05-26 08:05:00

Previous Entry  Add to memories!  Tell a Friend!  Next Entry
Entry tags:entry, hpstrangelove, team dragon

TEAM DRAGON ENTRY: HPStrangelove "Aberrations of Love and Hate"
Title: Aberrations of Love and Hate
Author: [info]hpstrangelove
Team: Dragon
Genre(s): Alternate Reality *Hover/Click for Games Definition of Alternate Reality*
Prompt(s): Ritual, Inheritance
Rating/Warnings/Kinks: NC-17; *Character Death but not Snape/Harry, Frottage, Harry is 17 in part of the fic, Child Abuse, Insinuations of child sexual abuse, Bondage, NonCon, Mention of Spanking, Mention of Piercing, Mention of het, Mention of HP/DM, Non-graphic Rape*
Word Count: 58,705
Summary: Harry Evans knew he should hate Severus Snape for what he was doing to him. No matter what words Snape made Harry say as far as choice went, Snape was still effectively forcing Harry to have sex with him, or so Snape thought. But as far as Harry was concerned, it couldn't be considered force if he wanted and enjoyed all the wonderfully depraved things Snape did to him.
A/N: This story is dedicated to my lovely sister, Bella, and to Felicity Bowden, both of whom provided valuable feedback. I owe a special thanks to Ms. Bowden for the information on the Royal Free Hospital.

Thank you also to my betas: [info]rakina for Brit Pick and SPAG, [info]joanwilder for SPAG — especially for teaching me about the past perfect tense and open-ended dialogue rules — and plot, and for being such a wonderful team captain. Thank you to the entire Dragon Team for providing information and support, and to [info]djin7 and the mods for all of their hard work.
In regards to the story: I reference a book, Billy Budd, by Herman Melville. Billy Budd is a story about a man falsely accused of plotting a mutiny and accidentally killing the officer who accuses him. The book debates the idea of what justice is. I must thank LJ user kibatsu, author of the Snarry fic 'Nights of Gethsemane', for introducing me to this book.
Lastly, I want to thank you, the reader. I realize this story is one of the longer fics in the Games. I hope that when you finish reading, you don't feel that I have wasted your time. Because this is an Alternate Reality, a few things might be initially confusing. I chose the AR Genre so I could make the characters the way I wanted them to be instead of the way JK wanted them to be. The Dursleys are loving towards Harry. There are no Weasleys — the Malfoys take their place in my AR. Tom Riddle is the same age as Lily and Severus. Lily's and Severus' birth dates remain as in canon, but Harry is born in 1982, not 1980, in order to fit my timeline. The remaining changes should become apparent as you read.





"Aberrations of Love and Hate by HPStrangelove"



Don't forget to review!




Mod note: POLLS ARE NOW CLOSED. THANK YOU FOR PARTICIPATING IN THE SNARRY GAMES.


Mod note: If you rec this story, please link to this POST, not the story itself, or the author/team will not get their proper vote tally or feedback. Thank you.




Mod note: Due to the length of this story, we will not be posting another until tomorrow morning. Thank you!


Page 1 of 2
<<[1] [2] >>

(Post a new comment)


[info]mac_tunes
2008-05-26 07:12 pm UTC (link)
Oh gawds! erlin! This is so good! The storyline is fabulous! The whole characterization is fantastic! Snape is so Snape, if you know what I meant. Without Weasleys in the picture, it's so much better not that I don't like Ron, he's just so.... nvm. The description is so beautiful! Love it! Love it lots! Thank you!

I knew it! I knew it! Snape can make Harry come just on his sexy voice alone!

(Reply to this) (Thread)

(no subject) - [info]hpstrangelove, 2008-05-26 08:05 pm UTC

[info]ex_lilyseyes671
2008-05-26 08:14 pm UTC (link)
OMG - your Snape is excellent - cunning, coniving and a right bastard! And Harry is a perfect match! Brilliant!

(Reply to this) (Thread)

(no subject) - [info]hpstrangelove, 2008-05-26 09:48 pm UTC

[info]b_e_skrewt
2008-05-26 09:33 pm UTC (link)
This is really very good. My two tiny critiques are: (1) I felt that it ended somewhat abruptly, although I liked the idea of Snape and Harry doing a ritual together; and (2) From about part 2 scene 2 to the end, it is absolutely RIVETING, but parts of part 1 felt a bit disjointed or like they needed trimming - it is not as compelling as part 2 scene 2 ff.

However I'm only mentioning these things because it's otherwise such an amazingly riveting fiction - really excellent job. thank you for writing this and sharing it with us!!!

(Reply to this) (Thread)

(no subject) - [info]hpstrangelove, 2008-05-26 09:44 pm UTC

[info]josan
2008-05-27 01:22 am UTC (link)
OMG! This has got to stop. Every time I sit to tackle that stack ... growing taller by the day .. of marking, I take a little side-trip to IJ and that's it for the marking.

Sigh.

However, that whimper out of the way, may I just say that when I shall be marking close towards midnight my time, I shall be remembering with great pleasure the hours I spent with this story.

Congratulations on the AR...you got everyone in (frankly, it was fun not having the Weasleys around) and you created a great situation based on your prompts.

Now, I really REALLY have to get to that marking.

(Reply to this) (Thread)

(no subject) - [info]hpstrangelove, 2008-05-27 09:58 am UTC

[info]telwyrd
2008-05-27 02:30 am UTC (link)
An excellent story and wonderfully crafted! Potions Mage is such a cool concept. Well done!

(Reply to this) (Thread)

(no subject) - [info]hpstrangelove, 2008-05-27 10:01 am UTC

[info]nenyaentwhistle
2008-05-27 03:31 am UTC (link)
what an amazing story :) very nice tie-ins w/ canon.

(Reply to this) (Thread)

(no subject) - [info]hpstrangelove, 2008-05-27 10:09 am UTC

[info]keyairreem
2008-05-27 03:58 am UTC (link)
WOW! Sorry just can't think of anything but WOW.

(Reply to this) (Thread)

(no subject) - [info]hpstrangelove, 2008-05-27 10:13 am UTC

[info]ivylady
2008-05-27 06:05 am UTC (link)
Excellent story, teammate. I could have read more of it, if you felt like writing it.

Go DRAGONS!

(Reply to this) (Thread)

(no subject) - [info]hpstrangelove, 2008-05-27 10:22 am UTC

[info]joanwilder
2008-05-27 08:52 am UTC (link)
You're next on my reading list. I know I've already read it, but I'm looking forward to spending an evening with the polished copy.

(Reply to this) (Thread)

(no subject) - [info]hpstrangelove, 2008-05-27 10:26 am UTC

[info]plantinshadows
2008-05-27 11:48 am UTC (link)
When I first saw the warnings I thought for sure it was going to be one of these fics where Harry’s being sexually abused by Vernon Dursley... so, what a wonderful surprise to have them here as caring parents!!! I think this is my first nice! Vernon fic!

Draco in Ron’s role is rather amusing, even the Snape animosity is similar haha...
Snape’s a bit too handsome and violent for my taste, but still quite the intriguing.
I love that you used most of the ‘evil‘ characters in canon, like bellarix and lucius, and gave them more humanity. I can very well imagine bellatrix as a maneater and even poor lucius getting all upset over little muggle children... canon lucius would spin so fast in his grave, he’d roast!!

(Reply to this) (Thread)

(no subject) - [info]hpstrangelove, 2008-05-27 02:33 pm UTC

[info]jin_fenghuang
2008-05-27 11:55 am UTC (link)
Long reading list is long ;-P
*adds your fic*

This will keep me kneedeep in snarry for quiet some time!
Awesomeness and win!

(Reply to this) (Thread)

(no subject) - [info]hpstrangelove, 2008-05-27 02:36 pm UTC

[info]sookail
2008-05-27 03:25 pm UTC (link)
This is going to be sort of a strange review...
I really liked the style of your writing, I *love* long well-written fics - they`re like chocolate, imo! - and I couldn`t resist reading yours, despite the somewhat scary warnings. I especially loved the language you used to describe Harry`s work with Potions, and the descriptions themselves. Everybody was quite IC, despite the fact that the fic was alternate reality, which is not an easy thing to write. Snape was acting a bit weird but it`s not as if he was a sensible person in canon, so his obsession is completely believable. And the sexual tension was burning hot!
Alas, I have a reallly biiiig squik about D/s - none for rape etc. And I wish the fic had had a warning for D/s :P

(Reply to this) (Thread)

(no subject) - [info]hpstrangelove, 2008-05-27 03:45 pm UTC
(no subject) - [info]joanwilder, 2008-05-29 02:45 am UTC

[info]centaury_squill
2008-05-27 03:32 pm UTC (link)
I must confess that so far I've only had time to skim your fic for the delightfully depraved sex scenes. And well worth the skim it was too! *fans self*

(Reply to this) (Thread)

(no subject) - [info]hpstrangelove, 2008-05-27 03:50 pm UTC

[info]hambares
2008-05-27 05:58 pm UTC (link)
Great alternate reality! I especially loved that Harry was almost killed by Tom slicing into his neck. Wonderful turn around.

Your story just kept drawing me on to read. What a perfect way to spend a few hours!

(Reply to this) (Thread)

(no subject) - [info]hpstrangelove, 2008-05-27 09:39 pm UTC

[info]fbowden
2008-05-27 07:09 pm UTC (link)
Gah! Wonderful reviews, well deserved for a wonderful fic! It was a pleasure to read all over again, fantastic job hun xxx

(Reply to this) (Thread)

(no subject) - [info]hpstrangelove, 2008-05-27 09:46 pm UTC

[info]gingertart50
2008-05-27 08:46 pm UTC (link)
A different take on Harry and Snape - Malfoy a philanthropist? Draco and Hermione? This fic was full of surprises, although I did keep shouting at Harry not to trust Tom and I was right! Excellent job! Go Dragons! RROOAARRRRRR!

(Reply to this) (Thread)

(no subject) - [info]hpstrangelove, 2008-05-27 09:59 pm UTC

[info]alisanne
2008-05-27 11:27 pm UTC (link)
I wouldn't normally read this because non-con really isn't my thing, but I wanted to let you know what I enjoyed about the story.
I liked your characterizations of Petunia and Vernon, that was a lovely surprise, Also, it was nice to see Harry Sorted into a different House
and I appreciated your treatment of Draco and all the Malfoys.
I admit I shielded my eyes at bit at the non-con so I can't comment on that, but I do like it when there is a happy ending, so yay!
Nice job with your prompts. :)

(Reply to this) (Thread)

(no subject) - [info]hpstrangelove, 2008-05-28 02:03 am UTC

[info]torino10154
2008-05-28 01:10 am UTC (link)
Intriguing fic-I definitely wondered why everything had to be so different but by the second half of the story it all came together for me. There definitely was some hawt sex in there, I liked Draco's role a lot, the back story about Snape and Lily and Tom (!!!) was well crafted. And the Potions Mage was an excellent invention. Nicely done.

(Reply to this) (Thread)

(no subject) - [info]hpstrangelove, 2008-05-28 02:07 am UTC

[info]tsujton
2008-05-28 01:36 am UTC (link)
What a cleverly plotted alt re! THis sorting was terrific:
---
Neville ended up in Gryffindor, although he didn't seem to mind. He said he hated to read, and seeing that he was brave enough to say that in front of the three Ravenclaws only proved that he'd been sorted into the right house.
---

Sometimes, a seemingly simple sentence is perfect and deep:
---
Then they were both laughing, the tension between them gone, but not the worry.
---

Your take on a horcrux with Tom usinge Dark Magic to bring Harry back to life was brill!

And this was so sad and twisted it hurt:
---
If Harry could find a way to turn that hate around, to get Snape to see he could love Harry just as much as he professed to hate Harry, maybe Harry could bring back that person Snape had been when Snape had been young and in love with Harry's mum.
---

poor Harry...


Well done!

(Reply to this) (Thread)

(no subject) - [info]hpstrangelove, 2008-05-28 02:20 am UTC

[info]galad222000
2008-05-28 06:29 am UTC (link)
Riveting story and quite a unique take on the prompts. Loved the different personalities you gave the canon characaters. CB

(Reply to this) (Thread)

(no subject) - [info]hpstrangelove, 2008-05-28 10:26 am UTC

[info]txrabbit
2008-05-28 01:47 pm UTC (link)
I was really intrigued with your characters and truly enjoyed this unusual tale. Thanks so much for sharing.

(Reply to this) (Thread)

(no subject) - [info]hpstrangelove, 2008-05-28 09:46 pm UTC

[info]nestinghedwig
2008-05-29 01:22 am UTC (link)
Combine parental Dursleys, a protective Draco, a moral Lucius, a delightfully depraved Severus, a not-so-innocent Harry and "benign" Uncle Tom with his hidden agendas. Mix in the repeated occurrences of the light/dark uses for Sectumsempra and add a miracle cure. Stir until blended and serve.

Wonderful, simply wonderful.

(Reply to this) (Thread)

(no subject) - [info]hpstrangelove, 2008-05-29 01:18 pm UTC

[info]joanwilder
2008-05-29 02:50 am UTC (link)
One of the nice surprises of these Games has been how much I've liked and appreciated the AR fics. Mostly because I'd been wary of them before. I've looked forward to your story going up, because you've some of the best AR scenarios I've yet to see: a likable Petunia and the Verno, a relationship between Snape and Lily that, instead of fixing Snape on protecting Harry, caused him to wish him ill; I loved the trio of Hermione, Harry and Draco, assisting sick Muggles, the Potions Mages and the Ritual. All the canon things you worked in, but slightly different made me happy too, especially Lucius. But the big cahuna was Tom Riddle. I think your reader knows, but isn't sure, and at the end says, "AHA! I knew it!" Non-con is one of my kinks, and those were so well done!

A wonderful story, with fantastic writing as well. You wrote perfectly to your genre and prompts too. You should be proud! I know I am, Dragon! ROAR!!

(Reply to this) (Thread)

(no subject) - [info]hpstrangelove, 2008-05-29 01:30 pm UTC

[info]snarry_fan7
2008-05-29 04:57 am UTC (link)
Magnificent work! So angsty, yet hot and plotty too. I like how things are different, yet the basis from the books is still to be found throughout the plot. I really like the way Severus and Harry interact, Draco and Hermione are great as well. I also love the magic with the Water of Life, and Severus' skill combining magic with Muggle technology; very fascination. Well done.~Sophia

(Reply to this) (Thread)

(no subject) - [info]hpstrangelove, 2008-05-29 01:37 pm UTC

[info]simons_flower
2008-05-30 07:36 am UTC (link)
I really enjoyed how you "adjusted" canon for this -- though the hardest part was wrapping my mind around good Dursleys. And the dub-con bondage? *fans self* Um, yeah, that was nice.

But your Riddle was perfect here. And you even managed to work in a Horcrux :)

(Reply to this) (Thread)

(no subject) - [info]hpstrangelove, 2008-05-30 09:57 am UTC

Page 1 of 2
<<[1] [2] >>


Home | Site Map | Manage Account | TOS | Privacy | Support | FAQs