Harry, for all of his good qualities, was always too caught up in the way a person treated him and how they looked on the outside to make his decisions.
That is so true; I thought this was so obvious in HBP--Harry had 'me me me' tunnel vision that made me want to smack him.
I'm looking forward to reading your story; it's been great being on the same team, and if one of the Dragons doesn't write you Mpreg Comment Pr0n, I will personally roast them. ROAR!!