I really enjoyed how you drew Harry's character, showed how he was growing into being a man people could count on, a worthy person, even as you contrasted it to how stagnant Snape had become. And, damn, how twisted is it that he only wanted Harry for his eyes, in a sense? Were this horror, I'd imagine Harry plucking out his own eyes and giving them to Snape, but this isn't a B-movie :)