I almost turned away from the incest warning, but since I'd promised myself I would read and comment on every entry (even if only to say, 'I'm sorry; I couldn't read this') I decided to skim it and see what constituted 'incest'. A short skim became a read-through and returned to become a slow thoughtful read. It's odd to me how fascinated I became with your story because you hit so many of my squicks--incest, het threesome, heavy unrelieved angst, present tense, and arthouse language. Amazing really that I finished it at all, yet there is a symmetry and justice about it I'm going to be thinking of for quite a while. Well done.