Ahhhh, I felt so sorry for Harry :( He was so frustrated with his apasia and people were now treating him like he was an infant. Someone who could no longer make his own choices. Severus used tough friendship/love and it worked. No wonder Harry couldn't help falling in love with him :)
Anyway I love the unique direction you took with this story. I'd read a continuation of it if you decided to write one.
Oh, and you really have a crazy dancing cockatoo icon ^_^ Is he yours?