Excellent; funny and IC for al,. and a fitting fate for Lucius, and did I mention funny?
"Never mention gerbils and sex"..do we even want to know what traumatic experience triggered that? The Severus 'fantasies were so good, and drifted into a pony was sweet, in a perverted way.
Harry got a few good lines in too, as in "Is it MY problem?" High marks, fun story. Felaine