Hi! I had to come back to tell you that your TITLE is haunting me. I mean, it's so PERFECT. The title case capitalization, too, is perfect. I think I will need to make it my journal name!!
i think it was maybe a bit underwritten in parts
Omg, this is EXACTLY how I often feel when I write. It's just...you don't want to distract yourself or the reader with the extra words, right? :D I mean, you want to stay focused on the task at hand. Then ppl read and are like, hmmm....not sure I followed... *laughs* I've definitely gotten enough reactions like that to make me think hard about this, although I remain firmly convinced that underexplanation is less grievous than overexplanation. Just me, though. ♥