I can't begin to even tell you how much I loved this story. I made an MP3 file of it so I could listen to it today while I walked. It was so good, I kept listening to it when I went back to work after lunch. I had to finish it!
Everything was perfect - the slow realization of how they felt about each other, Snape's talking Harry into staying with his family responsibilities. And I like Draco, and their kids, and poor Al; I remember so well the hurt feeling of seeing a 'crush' in someone else's arms - I wish I had an imagination like yours! I never would have come up with something as original as this.
And in the end, they're together! Go YOU! (except, you're not on my team - oh well, if I could vote, you'd still get a perfect score from me!)