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snarrymod (snarrymod) wrote in snarry_games,
@ 2008-04-29 20:16:00

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TEAM DRAGON ENTRY: Lilyseyes "Immaculate Misconception"
Title: Immaculate Misconception
Author: lilyseyes **See the Author's Fic Archive HERE: Lilyseyes at HPFandom**
Team: Dragon
Genre(s): Romance, Alternate Universe *Hover/Click for Games Definition of Alternate Universe*.
Prompt(s): Baby Blues
Rating/Warnings/Kinks: NC-17; *Mpreg/first-time/touch of angst*
Word Count: +/-25,000
Summary: Harry managed to save Snape that night in the Shrieking Shack with healing magic but Harry didn’t know his own strength...
A/N: Beta'd by : rakina , gingertart50, joanwilder, and the_minx_17 and Team DRAGON!

"Immaculate Misconception by Lilyseyes"

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alisanne
2008-04-30 05:36 am UTC (link)

Oh my dear! *wipes away happy tears*
That was glorious and sweet and so very sexy! Just what I have come to expect from you. *g*

I love Severus' slow realization of Harry's newfound maturity, the way Harry wormed his way into Severus' life and heart, and Poppy and Hermione's cameo appearances were perfect.
And OMG, the scene at Harry's party made me literally LOL. *giggles*
And then there is the sex. Guh! No one does hot, sweet, sensual Snarry like you do, dear! Great job with this, even if you are on that other team. :P

Bravo!

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lilyseyes, 2008-05-01 01:34 am UTC

fainscribbles, 2008-05-01 06:36 am UTC

lilyseyes, 2008-05-01 06:58 am UTC

telwyrd
2008-04-30 05:49 am UTC (link)

This was a wonderful first-time story with a good mix of angst, humor, and romance.

The sadness he felt tonight was every bit as sharp as it had been the day Lily had died.

::wibbles:: Poor Severus.

"You were told to make sure you ate, Severus! Little meals several times a day, but no, you refuse to give up thirty-nine years of habit and this is what happens: dehydrated, exhausted, underweight and unconscious! Are you completely satisfied now?"

Madam Pomfrey! You go, girlfriend!

Madam Pomfrey cut him off with another gesture at the books. "You would do well to remember how randy the influx of hormones makes a pregnant wizard and be thankful for any opportunity Severus might give you to bring him to climax. The endorphin this releases has a calming effect and it will be a marked improvement over a pregnant, sexually frustrated, ill-tempered man like Severus Snape."

::jaw drops:: Uh, oooookay... ::totters off::

"Get out of my house, Potter! You're not wanted here!"

::headdesk:: Oh, Snape, please to unlax.

It didn't matter ultimately; Severus knew he'd be alone, just as he'd always been.

Nononono, it'll be different this time, rlyrly! Be strong, Harry!

Hungarian Horntail plushie!! ::squeeeee!::

::heh:: Scheming Snape trying to come up with plan after plan to get rid of Harry was fun to read.

The ember of hope that Harry had struggled to keep from going out suddenly burst into flame inside his body and he found that everything now seemed brighter in his eyes.

Finally! Oh plz, oh plz, oh plz!!

"I have no desire to hear your pathetic excuses, Potter! It's just another example of your immaturity, acting without thinking! How do you expect me to trust you with this child when you can't even be trusted to keep your affairs private! Get out of my sight, you disgust me!"

D'oh! Why do you hurt Harry so? :(

Harry's letter was so heart-wrenching.

"I didn't take anything, Professor," Harry whispered brokenly. "I was just trying to find a reason to go on."

::wibbles:: Oh, poor Harry. ::nudges Snape:: Make things right!

Severus sat propped up against pillows, a bemused expression on his face as he glanced up from the equally tiny baby in his arms. Keenan slept contentedly, older than his identical twin by less than five minute. Evan having been discovered as Poppy had gone to heal the birthing incision, much to everyone's surprise.

Twins! Great googly moogly! Yeah! Welcome, Evan and Keenan!

"Yes, absolutely perfect, love."

'Nuff said! ::inserts And they all lived happily ever after.::

Harry was really wonderful throughout the story. So kind, patient, and caring. I loved how he managed to slowly woo and win over Severus.

Snape...::sighs:: was his usual cantankerous and snarky self. I loved how he slowly but surely thawed under Harry's pampering. Heehee!

A lovely story! Highly satisfying! Terrific!

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lilyseyes, 2008-05-01 02:03 am UTC

unbroken_halo
2008-04-30 06:18 am UTC (link)

Okay... apologies for the double comments and am trying this again because there so needs to be an editing function for screw ups like me that have insomnia. LOL!

YAY! SQUEE! Accidental M-Preg! For that alone I love you even if you are on that other team. *g* I absolutely adored this fic. Snape's snark and Harry's tenacity were perfect! Madame Pomfrey! Twins! Between you and

alisanne I have my quota of Snarry fluff and am quite content! Thank you! And I've so abused the ! key in this comment. LOL!

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the_minx_17, 2008-04-30 10:41 am UTC

lilyseyes, 2008-05-01 02:37 am UTC

unbroken_halo, 2008-05-01 05:29 pm UTC

rakina, 2008-04-30 11:23 am UTC

lilyseyes, 2008-05-01 02:38 am UTC

unbroken_halo, 2008-05-01 05:27 pm UTC

lilyseyes, 2008-05-01 02:05 am UTC

unbroken_halo, 2008-05-01 05:22 pm UTC

	wichie 2008-04-30 06:20 am UTC (link)
	Geezus, I cry buckets over you stories, but this was the quickest sob-fest by far! By which I mean that it make me cry early on, not for a short period of time ... A lovely way to play with canon and cliche. (Reply to this) (Thread)

lilyseyes, 2008-05-01 02:32 am UTC

wichie, 2008-05-01 09:27 pm UTC

lilyseyes, 2008-05-02 01:42 am UTC

	lalaith_niniel 2008-04-30 07:08 am UTC (link)
	This was absolutely wonderful! My heart was in my throat with tears in my eyes for the last bit, but I furiously blinked back the tears in order to finish. I love tenacious Harry, and you definitely wrote him well. Great story! (Reply to this) (Thread)

lilyseyes, 2008-05-01 03:18 am UTC

	the_minx_17 2008-04-30 10:39 am UTC (link)
	Just as lovely this time, m'dear, as it was the first time. wanders away with a grin (Reply to this) (Thread)

lilyseyes, 2008-05-01 03:18 am UTC

	centaury_squill 2008-04-30 11:07 am UTC (link)
	I don't normally read mpreg, but this one stole my heart. Lovely. And yay for the dragon toy - ROARRRRRRRR! (Reply to this) (Thread)

lilyseyes, 2008-05-01 03:21 am UTC

	rakina 2008-04-30 11:15 am UTC (link)
	I am so happy to see this story posted. I loved betaing it - such a great plotline and a lovely, feel-good ending that left me smiling. What more could the Dragons need? Roaaar!!!! (Reply to this) (Thread)

lilyseyes, 2008-05-01 03:24 am UTC

rakina, 2008-05-01 10:09 am UTC

lilyseyes, 2008-05-02 01:14 am UTC

	sweetmelodykiss 2008-04-30 12:56 pm UTC (link)
	Beautiful and sweet. Loved the accidental Mpreg. Of course, I love everything you write. This was absolutely outstanding!!! (Reply to this) (Thread)

lilyseyes, 2008-05-01 03:28 am UTC

	eriador117 2008-04-30 01:21 pm UTC (link)
	Now, although I am not a fan of pregnant Snape I decided to give it a go because you wrote it my dear and I must say I was pleasantly surprised! You kept him so in character, snarking on about all the niggles of pregnancy and then deciding to try and seduce Harry to get him run away, LOL! Lovely, just lovely! take care, Annette (Reply to this) (Thread)

lilyseyes, 2008-05-01 03:37 am UTC

	red_day_dawning 2008-04-30 01:51 pm UTC (link)
	This was wonderful - sweet & lovely & funny & so sexy. What a brilliant fic! (Reply to this) (Thread)

lilyseyes, 2008-05-01 03:38 am UTC

red_day_dawning, 2008-05-01 02:07 pm UTC

lilyseyes, 2008-05-02 01:14 am UTC

	witchdragon 2008-04-30 02:48 pm UTC (link)
	This is so wonderful!!!!! I love the slow build up of their relationship- nad the sex is so yummy!! Just perfect! (Reply to this) (Thread)

lilyseyes, 2008-05-01 03:54 am UTC

	hambares 2008-04-30 03:03 pm UTC (link)
	Goodness lilyseyes! You wrung me out in the emotions department. I'm exhausted. I was torn between wanting to comfort Severus and wring his neck! And Harry bravely faced it all until it was just too much at the end. I'm so glad that Severus reasoned thing sout before it was too late. That was soo romantic! (Reply to this) (Thread)

lilyseyes, 2008-05-01 04:01 am UTC

	snarry_fan7 2008-04-30 03:20 pm UTC (link)
	Marvelous, sweet work! I really love how their relationship builds and how well they recover from that stupid bint's attempt to take Harry away. This is just what I needed to read after the day I've had so far (see my IJ if you're curious, lol).~Sophia (Reply to this) (Thread)

lilyseyes, 2008-05-01 04:02 am UTC

snarry_fan7, 2008-05-01 12:00 pm UTC

	klynie1 2008-04-30 03:43 pm UTC (link)
	What a wonderful, sweet story! I completely loved Snape's denunciation at the beginning of the story - you made it so vivid, and then went on to show us why he was so angry. Harry's determination was great, too. So much fun to read! Thank you! (Reply to this) (Thread)

lilyseyes, 2008-05-01 04:03 am UTC

	plantinshadows 2008-04-30 03:48 pm UTC (link)
	aww ... there is a reason why I came to like mpreg! I loved Harry trying to be all mature, responsible and nice and poor snape wallowing in his hormones haha. I have developed a strong animosity against ginny, she's annoying.. harry should have hexed her back at the party! or sev should have done it hehehe!! (Reply to this) (Thread)

lilyseyes, 2008-05-01 04:03 am UTC

	snarrysgirl 2008-04-30 04:28 pm UTC (link)
	oh my gosh!!! That was amazing!!!! Once I started reading it, I literally put everything down until it was finished (including my paper that's due today!) haha! Good job!!!! (Reply to this) (Thread)

lilyseyes, 2008-05-01 04:08 am UTC

	torino10154 2008-04-30 04:42 pm UTC (link)
	Great fic! I love that Severus is the pregnant one. snort And you had me in tears when Harry was brushing his hair, talking about his childhood. And of course again when they had that little 'misunderstanding'. Silly boys. Utterly charming story-well done. (Reply to this) (Thread)

lilyseyes, 2008-05-01 04:34 am UTC

	cruisedirector 2008-04-30 04:56 pm UTC (link)
	Totally not an mpreg fan but I enjoyed Snape snarky with morning sickness anyway. g Nicely done! (Reply to this) (Thread)

lilyseyes, 2008-05-01 04:44 am UTC

lovesseamstress
2008-04-30 05:22 pm UTC (link)

Oh, my...how I loved this! All my personal kinks--first-time, mpreg, reluctant Snape, persistent Harry. No one writes romantic Snarry like you do! I was so pleased to see the prompt you had chosen (I'm a big fan of your Breathe series), and the story did not disappoint. I like the way you played out the angst along with the growing romance, it made the end so much sweeter. Thanks for a terrific read!

--C

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lilyseyes, 2008-05-01 04:45 am UTC

	kookoolaka 2008-04-30 05:23 pm UTC (link)
	Lovely emotional piece. I loved Snape trying to chase Harry off with sex. (Reply to this) (Thread)

lilyseyes, 2008-05-01 04:53 am UTC

	ladydeth12 2008-04-30 05:43 pm UTC (link)
	So completely beautiful and emotional. I loved this piece. Snarky!Severus was great. My heart was breaking when Severus told Harry to get out at the end. I just wanted to cry for them. But I'm glad that everything came out perfectly in the end :) (Reply to this) (Thread)

lilyseyes, 2008-05-01 04:53 am UTC

e_witness
2008-04-30 06:36 pm UTC (link)

One should never admit to this in a review, but I don't have the brains to restrain myself at the moment. I sort of, um, skimmed bits of this, so I'll have to come back and reread. There were moments of melodramatic romantic angst toward the end that prickled at me, but I'm a finicky reader, and it's all cushioned in wonderfully coherent writing. I liked especially the dry, slightly humorous tone to Snape's perspective (The man did not just say, after storming Harry's MoM birthday celebration, that he prided himself on his calm demeanor. Surely, that is just a case of excess beeswax on my part? Or maybe I underestimate the pregnant male's power of self-delusion).

Don't give him a choice, my boy. - Mm, excellent scene with Pomfrey that segues smoothly into the succession of caretaker!Harry and bedridden!Snape ones. Clever ploy to throw them together and kind of mirrors their relationship rather well: oh-so-careful, stepping-on-eggshells Harry who needs to care and vulnerable, grouchy Snape who hates his own helplessness. I might be reading too much into it, but it seems to set up the relationship nicely.

"Your spawn hates me, Potter." - Ooo, my favorite sparkly line! Classic snarky Snape through and through; pregnant through Harry's typical botched ideas and doubly miserable because of it, how could he not take this shot? It's THE Snape line for me. :D

I'm sure I had more to say, but again, I will be rereading, so I'll save the rest of my senseless blather till then.

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lilyseyes, 2008-05-01 05:29 am UTC

	joanwilder 2008-04-30 07:13 pm UTC (link)
	Things I enjoyed: that it was accidental and involved saving Snape's life, that Snape was incensed, that Harry was doggedly determined to do the right thing, and my favorite part is how Snape tried to use sex against him--so Snape! Great job, m'dear. You've done your team proud, Dragon. ROAR!!!! (Reply to this) (Thread)

lilyseyes, 2008-05-01 05:35 am UTC

	arielhime 2008-04-30 07:17 pm UTC (link)
	That was absolutely wonderful! Wow... emotional roller coaster for sure... but perfect! I loved it, my dear! hugs tightly (Reply to this) (Thread)

lilyseyes, 2008-05-01 05:36 am UTC

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