OMG, I don't even know where to begin! First of all, let me say this: It was an incredibly awesome read! I really enjoyed it!
It is well-written, well-crafted, all the details (especially about Harry's job, weapons etc) are just so amazing! And OMG, one of the things I'm very interested in are assassins, professional killers. I liked this fic so much because you made Harry Potter a very believable, realistic acting assassin!
I've never seen the movie, but now I really want to see it!
I loved it that you made Harry always scanning his surroundings for possible threats, that you made him play his little game of how many things within reach he could kill with.
Head Auror Ron has something, too! I could definitely feel the aura of expertise, experience and danger that surrounded him and especially Harry.
Your Snape is awesome! So very IC! So snarky! Brilliant!
I love the last fighting scene, when Harry is protecting Snape and professionally killing their attackers. It is a very exciting scene!
And this is here...
"Hey," he said softly. "Severus?" "Yes?" "Did you, by any chance, take a contract out on yourself?" "Yes." "You...well that...well...you..." Severus rose up on one elbow to face him, eyes hard. "You made me wait for eight years," he said plaintively. "Not that I was waiting, per se—" Harry made sure his face was sober. "Of course."
... is beautiful!
Thanks a lot for writing and sharing this great fic with us!!