I liked the quiet tone of this story. Harry’s dreams were very intriguing and I kept wondering what/who was behind them. The life debt was a great idea.
This is so beautiful: Harry looked down at Snape again, reaching down to adjust the man's robes just to be certain he'd not disturbed them any. He jerked his hand away again, remembering the admonishment then shook his head. He gave Snape a final searching gaze then bowed his head to the man. "Sir," he murmured softly and walked out of the tomb.