Tweak

InsaneJournal

Tweak says, "there he goes! i feel the pain"

Username: 
Password:    
Remember Me
  • Create Account
  • IJ Login
  • OpenID Login
Search by : 
  • View
    • Create Account
    • IJ Login
    • OpenID Login
  • Journal
    • Post
    • Edit Entries
    • Customize Journal
    • Comment Settings
    • Recent Comments
    • Manage Tags
  • Account
    • Manage Account
    • Viewing Options
    • Manage Profile
    • Manage Notifications
    • Manage Pictures
    • Manage Schools
    • Account Status
  • Friends
    • Edit Friends
    • Edit Custom Groups
    • Friends Filter
    • Nudge Friends
    • Invite
    • Create RSS Feed
  • Asylums
    • Post
    • Asylum Invitations
    • Manage Asylums
    • Create Asylum
  • Site
    • Support
    • Upgrade Account
    • FAQs
    • Search By Location
    • Search By Interest
    • Search Randomly

snarrymod ([info]snarrymod) wrote in [info]snarry_games,
@ 2008-04-25 08:17:00

Previous Entry  Add to memories!  Tell a Friend!  Next Entry
Entry tags:entry, team phoenix, unbroken_halo

TEAM PHOENIX ENTRY: Unbroken Halo "Revealing Truth"
Title: Revealing Truth
Author: [info]unbroken_halo
Team: Phoenix
Genre(s): Postwar
Prompt(s): Sleeplessness, Time Capsule
Rating/Warnings/Kinks: R *Spoilers for DH/ wanking*
Word Count: ~14,968 without DH quotes/ ~15,179 with DH quotes
Summary: “The search for truth is more precious than its possession.” By Albert Einstein
A/N: Text between * taken directly from Harry Potter and The Deathly Hallows, American Edition pages 682-683. Thank you to Team Phoenix for their support, brainstorming and encouragement. You are a brilliant group of people and I am better for having been allowed to work with you all. Many more thank yous to [info]leela_cat, [info]irana and [info]sevs_lil_secret for the betas.
Disclaimer: Harry Potter and all related characters in this verse are owned by JK Rowling and her subsidiaries. This is a piece of fiction based on that work and is in no way associated with said persons or draws monetary gain.





"Revealing Truth by Unbroken Halo"



Don't forget to review!




Mod note: POLLS ARE NOW CLOSED. THANK YOU FOR PARTICIPATING IN THE SNARRY GAMES.

Mod note: If you rec this story, please link to this POST, not the story itself, or the author/team will not get their proper vote tally or feedback. Thank you.

Page 2 of 3
<<[1] [2] [3] >>

(Post a new comment)


[info]ziasudra
2008-04-26 02:06 pm UTC (link)
I remember reading the barest beginnings of this at the team comm but then had to attend to RL obligations and never got to finish it. I'm so glad I finally got to sit down to read this! This is such a very creative way to respond to the prompts, and wow, I felt right there with Harry trying to figure out just what was going on. So glad he was able to bring Snape back :)

(Reply to this) (Thread)

(no subject) - [info]unbroken_halo, 2008-04-29 04:12 am UTC

[info]centaury_squill
2008-04-26 02:32 pm UTC (link)
Harry wanking in the Prefect's Bathroom - yum! And of course Snape would have a back-up plan of escape; we all know that - why didn't JKR?... but.... but...(and I'm sure you're tired of seeing this) WHAT HAPPENED NEXT??!!

(Reply to this) (Thread)

(no subject) - [info]unbroken_halo, 2008-04-29 04:14 am UTC

[info]vamp2puppy
2008-04-26 04:26 pm UTC (link)
Very enjoyable. I liked your use of the life debt.

(Reply to this) (Thread)

(no subject) - [info]unbroken_halo, 2008-04-29 04:15 am UTC

[info]plantinshadows
2008-04-26 07:29 pm UTC (link)
ahh how could you leave us like that?! I really want to know what happens after!! so.. nice fic, creepey sev and some mental smex... what more do you want?

(Reply to this) (Thread)

(no subject) - [info]unbroken_halo, 2008-04-29 04:17 am UTC

[info]iulia_linnea
2008-04-26 10:00 pm UTC (link)
What I like most about this is that it feels like a preamble to a greater Snarry adventure; they've got unfinished business, and it's going to be tough going sorting it out, but you've left an intriguing sense of hope that things will work out, and you've convinced me of their connection completely. :D

(Reply to this) (Thread)

(no subject) - [info]unbroken_halo, 2008-04-29 04:20 am UTC

[info]calico_sky
2008-04-26 10:15 pm UTC (link)
Ooh, what a lovely little evil ending! Nice job. ;)

(Reply to this) (Thread)

(no subject) - [info]unbroken_halo, 2008-04-29 04:20 am UTC

[info]josan
2008-04-26 11:54 pm UTC (link)
I love open-ended stories. What will happen to them? How will Kingsley deal with Harry? With Snape? How will the Wizardry World deal with a live Snape?

(I'm tempted to add: Who knows? Only the Shadow knows!)

Love, love, love this.

(Reply to this) (Thread)

(no subject) - [info]unbroken_halo, 2008-04-29 05:01 am UTC

[info]angela_snape
2008-04-27 01:33 am UTC (link)
This is fantastic... I love the reference to stoppering death.

(Reply to this) (Thread)

(no subject) - [info]unbroken_halo, 2008-04-29 05:03 am UTC

[info]leela_cat
2008-04-27 05:18 am UTC (link)
I love how you used the life debt in this story to bring Harry and Snape together. And the ending, where we see them unable to stop looking at each other, is a dynamite image.

Good job.

(Reply to this) (Thread)

(no subject) - [info]unbroken_halo, 2008-04-29 05:22 am UTC

[info]mimiheart
2008-04-27 11:46 pm UTC (link)
Please may I have some more? PLEASE???

(Reply to this) (Thread)

(no subject) - [info]unbroken_halo, 2008-04-29 05:23 am UTC

[info]nightcolors
2008-04-27 11:58 pm UTC (link)
I liked Harry's determination. And I totally despaired along with Harry at the fact that no one else seemed to understand Snape, at all.
Teddy was really cute. :)
The ending was nice as it was, but I couldn't help but hope for a bit more. :p
Thank you for sharing.

(Reply to this) (Thread)

(no subject) - [info]unbroken_halo, 2008-04-29 05:24 am UTC

[info]zephyr_macabee
2008-04-28 02:40 am UTC (link)
My heart was in my throat at the end. I was afraid that Williamson would succeed. Good story, twisty and full of mystery.

(Reply to this) (Thread)

(no subject) - [info]unbroken_halo, 2008-04-28 07:48 pm UTC

[info]akuma_river
2008-04-29 10:37 am UTC (link)
I absolutely loved this story.

I'm a sucker for mystery stories mixed with romance and this was perfect.

I had a funny feeling there was something up with Williamson. He just seemed odd to me. I was wondering for a bit if he was Snape, until you know, the funeral.

I wonder how Harry's friends will react to his new relationship? He certainly had a lot of resistance when he just wanted to add Snape's things to the time capsule.

I imagine they will blow a fuse when he mentions how he's lusting for him now... Then again, with his obsession with Snape, they might just take it as a given.

I absolutely love how snarky devious Snape is taking advantage of the situation, completely.

(Reply to this) (Thread)

(no subject) - [info]unbroken_halo, 2008-05-01 06:06 pm UTC

[info]ariadneelda
2008-04-29 03:56 pm UTC (link)
Interesting plot! I liked what you did with the life debt and how you brought Snape back. For some reason, until it happened, I wasn't entirely sure that Snape wouldn't remain dead and I enjoyed the uncertainty. I also loved the (sort of) open ending.

It seems we have that little fetish in common doesn't it, boy?

*snicker* So true!

(Reply to this) (Thread)

(no subject) - [info]unbroken_halo, 2008-05-01 06:01 pm UTC

[info]venturous
2008-04-29 04:11 pm UTC (link)
OMG, Severus rising from the grave!!! A fabulous way to resurrect our dark hero, chilling but funny and touching, too. CPR, *g*

(Reply to this) (Thread)

(no subject) - [info]unbroken_halo, 2008-05-01 05:51 pm UTC

[info]athenakt
2008-04-30 04:57 pm UTC (link)
Well written! I enjoyed the many many bits you've managed to cram into one fic; I only regret that the last part of the fic wasn't longer.

(Reply to this) (Thread)

(no subject) - [info]unbroken_halo, 2008-05-01 05:25 pm UTC

[info]elvirablue
2008-05-01 03:01 pm UTC (link)
I liked the quiet tone of this story. Harry’s dreams were very intriguing and I kept wondering what/who was behind them. The life debt was a great idea.

This is so beautiful:
Harry looked down at Snape again, reaching down to adjust the man's robes just to be certain he'd not disturbed them any. He jerked his hand away again, remembering the admonishment then shook his head. He gave Snape a final searching gaze then bowed his head to the man. "Sir," he murmured softly and walked out of the tomb.

(Reply to this) (Thread)

(no subject) - [info]unbroken_halo, 2008-05-01 05:18 pm UTC

[info]estioe
2008-05-02 08:35 am UTC (link)
That was a lovely read, Halo! :D

(Reply to this) (Thread)

(no subject) - [info]unbroken_halo, 2008-05-02 12:22 pm UTC

[info]shadowess
2008-05-03 05:53 am UTC (link)
wonderful story. This is a great way of getting Severus alive again, without it being a simple bandaid and all is well ^_^
I love how Harry was slow on the uptake to figure everything out, but not super slow. The characterization of Severus was fab.
I was expecting a "Next Chapter" link at the end *elbow**wink* =)

(Reply to this) (Thread)

(no subject) - [info]unbroken_halo, 2008-05-03 04:46 pm UTC

[info]spike7451
2008-05-04 12:36 pm UTC (link)
Two of my favourites, CluelessHarry and SneakySnape. Wonderful fic I enjoyed it immensely.
p.s. Would it be too greedy to ask for a "what happened next"? , in other words a sequel. :)

(Reply to this) (Thread)

(no subject) - [info]unbroken_halo, 2008-05-07 10:31 pm UTC

[info]yura_slash
2008-05-04 01:18 pm UTC (link)
interesting story. i do want to know more, though ^^

(Reply to this) (Thread)

(no subject) - [info]unbroken_halo, 2008-05-07 10:33 pm UTC

[info]twicet
2008-05-07 07:37 pm UTC (link)
Loved this. Thank you.

(Reply to this) (Thread)

(no subject) - [info]unbroken_halo, 2008-05-07 10:34 pm UTC

[info]hpstrangelove
2008-05-09 05:24 am UTC (link)
OMG - this was so perfect. Reading through the comments, I agree with everyone, but I have to add...this was really, really hot! I loved the sexual tension at the end, the things Snape said to Harry, the way he smelled Harry's hair, the way he touched Harry...definitely a scene to read over and over again.

(Reply to this) (Thread)

(no subject) - [info]unbroken_halo, 2008-05-16 06:02 pm UTC

[info]meglw0228
2008-05-15 07:30 am UTC (link)
OMG, so cruel! How could you leave it like that?? I know Harry and Severus were just about to get to the hot steamy sex!

That ending was very twisted...but interesting!

Very good writing, you almost had me believing it was really time for Harry to see that doctor at St. Mungo's! Great work, good luck to your team.

(Reply to this) (Thread)

(no subject) - [info]unbroken_halo, 2008-05-16 05:58 pm UTC

[info]aliciamasters
2008-05-19 03:52 am UTC (link)
I have never had that reaction to the end of a story before. It was equal parts "What? No! Don't stop there!" and "BWAHAHAHA (aka evil cackle)"! I was both thrilled and dismayed with your ambiguous ending. Which I think means it was effective.

It was a wonderful story, with Harry getting weaker as Snape waited for his rescue. Very interesting method of haunting his dreams...and his showers. Those would be the places I'd haunt, too!

I loved the snarky asides once Snape awoke. Very well done.

Thanks for such a thought-provoking story!

(Reply to this) (Thread)

(no subject) - [info]unbroken_halo, 2008-05-20 10:50 pm UTC

Page 2 of 3
<<[1] [2] [3] >>

Home | Site Map | Manage Account | TOS | Privacy | Support | FAQs