Ooo, if I were Sabrina ... and had that frame ... uh oh ...
I loved it, wonderfully written. It is rare we have an inclusion of a Muggle in stories but I loved Sabrina, especially the lovely understated way you have written her character, that enhanced the story in a most wonderful way, without subtracting (read overwhelming) from it. I loved your Harry and Sev, they were just right for me and my did I enjoy this one.