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snarrymod (snarrymod) wrote in snarry_games,
@ 2008-04-24 08:13:00

Entry tags:

dementordelta, entry, team phoenix

TEAM PHOENIX ENTRY: DementorDelta "That Place in The Dark"
Title: That Place In The Dark
Author: DementorDelta
Team: Phoenix
Genre(s): Romance, Hurt/Comfort
Prompt(s): Silver
Rating/Warnings/Kinks: Adult/EWE
Word Count: Approx. 15,800
Summary: Severus Snape has survived the war and the Dark Lord, but he may not survive Harry Potter.
A/N: Gratefully beta-read by Cruisedirector
Disclaimer: So disclaimed.

"That Place In The Dark by DementorDelta"

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alisanne
2008-04-24 04:08 pm UTC (link)

Eeeee! *bounces excitedly*
It's wonderful, Delta! Nicely plotty (very clever spell to keep Snape immobile and him and and Harry together, btw), I liked feisty Sabrina (she made me LOL several times), and of course Severus just had to be a stubborn git. *shakes head* Good thing Harry is so persistent. :)
And OMG, the smex. *fans self* Guh! So hot.
All the things I love in a story, hon. Awesome job!

Yay Snarry and Yay Team Phoenix! *glee*

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dementordelta, 2008-04-25 12:03 am UTC

	fbowden 2008-04-24 04:32 pm UTC (link)
	Oh yes!!!! Once again, Delta, you have blown me away. Of course it has always been Potter!! I just loved everything about this, so very, very much. sighs happily You always write the most beautifully moving stories, fantastic love scenes and humourous descriptions of Harry from Snape's POV that leave me gasping for air to laugh harder. Wonderful! Flic x (Reply to this) (Thread)

dementordelta, 2008-04-25 12:04 am UTC

	cruisedirector 2008-04-24 05:06 pm UTC (link)
	You already know all the places this made me giggle and sigh happily and whimper, but I figured I'd remind you that I love it. smooch (Reply to this) (Thread)

dementordelta, 2008-04-25 12:05 am UTC

gryffindorj
2008-04-24 05:46 pm UTC (link)

God wow um yes I loved it. I come at Snarry from a bit of an odd place as I like Harry a tinge more than I like Snape (but only a tinge). You do this wonderful job of making adult manly Harry without sacrificing any thing that is essentially Snape. When Harry yelled 'Enough" at them in the kitchen, I sunk out my chair in pure joy and hottness. The whole story though was just really good and I loved Snape in it. I love Harry going about shirtless and Snape not looking at him. Nothing like finding a clever way to get a young man shirtless and chopping wood!

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dementordelta, 2008-04-25 12:07 am UTC

	plantinshadows 2008-04-24 05:50 pm UTC (link)
	ooohh very nice, indeed! A curse were fungi spread over your body, that's new, which is great! ahh and snape being all snape with poor little harry... haha the animagus form like his dad?!! what would Snape say to that? (Reply to this) (Thread)

dementordelta, 2008-04-25 12:08 am UTC

	snowpuppies 2008-04-24 05:55 pm UTC (link)
	I enjoyed this muchly. I especially liked how the curse caused mushrooms to erupt on Snape's skin - reminded me of the barnacles in PotC. Very creative and interesting curse. Great Job. (Reply to this) (Thread)

dementordelta, 2008-04-25 12:10 am UTC

	centaury_squill 2008-04-24 06:02 pm UTC (link)
	Glorious tale of Harry turning the tables on his "sole detractor" g Inventive and really hot! (Reply to this) (Thread)

dementordelta, 2008-04-25 12:11 am UTC

	snarry_fan7 2008-04-24 06:17 pm UTC (link)
	A most creative use of magic and the prompt. I love the comforting aspect when Harry was caring for Severus. I love Severus' reaction to the milk, it reminded me of Edward Elric (Fullmetal Alchemist, he absolutely hates milk, unless it's in stew). Lovely work!~Sophia (Reply to this) (Thread)

dementordelta, 2008-04-25 12:18 am UTC

	cluegirl 2008-04-24 06:23 pm UTC (link)
	Sabrina is a terribly cute facilitatrix. I love how smoothly she fitted into the dynamic as the originating point of change. And, of course, I always love your long-suffering, patient Harry, and your obstinate, defensive Snape. Well done, this! Cheers! (Reply to this) (Thread)

dementordelta, 2008-04-25 12:24 am UTC

	kinwad 2008-04-24 06:23 pm UTC (link)
	Absolutely fantastic fic, Delta! You should be so very proud! You not only met the prompt and genre admirably, but you wove a very convincing and well thought out story! Nicely done! (Reply to this) (Thread)

dementordelta, 2008-04-25 12:25 am UTC

	stellamoon 2008-04-24 06:35 pm UTC (link)
	Wonderful, just wonderful!!!!!! That wound was so icky it almost made me ill. I imagined that it even smelled bad. Ewwww. And, oh... the toe sucking and gentle love making were so fabulous!!!!!!! And by the fire, too! Nothing more romantic than that, is there?? Terrific job, and I enjoyed it so very much. (Reply to this) (Thread)

dementordelta, 2008-04-25 12:30 am UTC

the_con_cept
2008-04-24 06:47 pm UTC (link)

%$&(@#)7aaaUGH! This is one of the best stories I have EVER READ, I swear! Foot licking and hotness and your Harry (the best Harry there is) and even a little bit of angst that really got me! Oh, what a story. Curse you, you Phoenix, for churning out such a fabulous fic! Damn! And as always, your Harry is so cheeky and charming that I could just burst with happiness, I really could.

*goes to save to favorites and read again and again and again and again*

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dementordelta, 2008-04-25 12:32 am UTC

whitestar
2008-04-24 07:41 pm UTC (link)

Wonderful story! I enjoyed it tremendously :) I love how you worked in Sabrina and how she wasn't Obliviated at the end. I've never liked the stories where Muggles always end up Obliviated. The romance and angst were just at the right levels too.

I would love to see if Harry's prediction about the baby becoming a wizard comes true. It'd be interesting seeing Severus/Harry and Sabrina and the baby interact together in a future fic. They are a fun group ^_^

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dementordelta, 2008-04-25 12:34 am UTC

Harrys prediction - (Anonymous), 2012-01-23 12:28 am UTC

	gingertart50 2008-04-24 07:42 pm UTC (link)
	Lovely fic! I really enjoyed Snape sprouting fungi, and Sabrina showing Snape that not all Muggles are unpleasant or stupid, and Harry being Harry. Good job I'm not allowed to vote, really, or I'd be giving lots of points to the opposition.... (Reply to this) (Thread)

dementordelta, 2008-04-25 01:01 am UTC

	celandineb 2008-04-24 08:00 pm UTC (link)
	grins Great story, Delta! Sadly no time to work up a proper detailed comment, but wanted to let you know I read and enjoyed very much! (Reply to this) (Thread)

dementordelta, 2008-04-25 01:03 am UTC

	florida_minxie 2008-04-24 08:29 pm UTC (link)
	What a fun story! Honestly. I giggled, I snorted, I wanted to slap Snape (always a must for a good Snarry), and in the end I sat here grinning like a loon. If only I could vote... 9's across the board! (Reply to this) (Thread)

dementordelta, 2008-04-25 01:37 am UTC

	meri_oddities 2008-04-24 08:39 pm UTC (link)
	Lovely story, m'dear. You have such an imagination. Not to mention, but I will, the hot, hot sex. Toe sucking, OMG. (Reply to this) (Thread)

dementordelta, 2008-04-25 01:42 am UTC

	allika 2008-04-24 08:59 pm UTC (link)
	That was a great read. I can't stop smiling. (Reply to this) (Thread)

dementordelta, 2008-04-25 01:44 am UTC

	ex_lilyseyes671 2008-04-24 09:08 pm UTC (link)
	OMG - just gorgeous! I adore Harry's foot fetish! Wonderful, beautiful story! (Reply to this) (Thread)

dementordelta, 2008-04-25 01:46 am UTC

ashenv
2008-04-24 09:28 pm UTC (link)

Ooo, if I were Sabrina ... and had that frame ... uh oh ...

I loved it, wonderfully written. It is rare we have an inclusion of a Muggle in stories but I loved Sabrina, especially the lovely understated way you have written her character, that enhanced the story in a most wonderful way, without subtracting (read overwhelming) from it. I loved your Harry and Sev, they were just right for me and my did I enjoy this one.

Wonderful indeed, thank you so much!

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dementordelta, 2008-04-25 01:52 am UTC

	swtalmnd 2008-04-24 09:32 pm UTC (link)
	Ahahahaha the MILK! I'd love it for that alone, but there's so much more here. I love the old-school Misunderstanding here, Snape being his cranky bastardly self and Harry trying as best he can, seeing past or around the bad parts of Snape to the part that made him a spy instead of just a bad wizard. A delightful way to spend my afternoon reading! (Reply to this) (Thread)

dementordelta, 2008-04-25 02:27 am UTC

	sev1970 2008-04-24 09:34 pm UTC (link)
	I was a bit squeamish during the foot/toe sucking scene, but the rest of it was, as always, very good. Sabrina was a wonderful addition; A Muggle's reaction to magic is always fun to read. (Reply to this) (Thread)

dementordelta, 2008-04-25 02:30 am UTC

	torino10154 2008-04-24 09:53 pm UTC (link)
	Your Harry is wonderful. Snape's injury was described so well, was so fascinating I found myself wanting to know more about it. Sabrina was a lot of fun, helping the boys along. And yes, when Snape pulled a, well, a Snape, I just about died. Beautiful scene in front of the fire. Great fic. (Reply to this) (Thread)

dementordelta, 2008-04-25 02:32 am UTC

	japonicastar 2008-04-24 10:01 pm UTC (link)
	This is gorgeous. Kinks, and plenty of them, wonderful cheeky characterisation and sighs well, I just love it and wanted to say how much I enjoyed reading this. Thank you so much for sharing this lovely snarry with us! (Reply to this) (Thread)

dementordelta, 2008-04-25 02:33 am UTC

	lalaith_niniel 2008-04-24 10:21 pm UTC (link)
	Your Harry is just about the most endearing thing ever. You have a way of getting him under Snape's skin so skilfully that Snape doesn't realize it until it's far too late, and I love that about him. You also have such a talent at writing that a footaphobe such as myself was contemplating the sexiness of Snape's feet, so well done, you! (Reply to this) (Thread)

dementordelta, 2008-04-25 02:34 am UTC

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