I loved the crossword set-up, Ernie Macmillan, the Chinese locale, Gang Li, Mei-ping (kudos from Team Dragon!), the intriguing back story to Snape's 'transformation', the delicious and HOT scene where Harry gets some has his aura 'adjusted,' the fitting end of Snape, the transferring of Zabini to Hogwarts, the knowledge that Harry will finally be completely happy, and that he, once again, owes his life to Snape.
And the cherry on the top is Bai Wai in the Headmaster's office. Snape will never be gone nor forgotten.
Terrific job--I'm so happy you're a DRAGON! ROARRRRRRR!