LOL!! OMG that was hysterical and hot. Let's see if I can comment coherently now. I love the strikethroughs and notes, Snape's preferences for the flower and Quidditch player, Harry and Snape's first encounter, and Harry, bless his heart, not realizing it really was him. And even with the light cracky tone, when she watches them and sees 'the moment' between them, god, that was just so lovely and romantic. Perfect ending-such a shame about the book :P . Well done.