*glomps you* Obviously they were saving the best for last! I can't believe it's almost time for the actual stories to post! Time sure flies when you're picking over your fic like a dead phoenix um, scab. ;) OMG, we're going to have so much fun!
I would have liked it had Severus been nastier, too. It added a dimension of moral ambiguity that gets me hot. *g* Not that his love of Lily was especially 'good,' it was just kinda trite. Oh, well.
P.S. When I get a chance, I'll write you a smattering of chan bonding smutness. ; )